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I don't think it is a good idea for teenagers to have job s while they are still students .It can interfere with their studies, it can disrupt their home life, and it takes away part of their childhood that they can never replace.

Education today is very complex and difficult .In older to learn and get good grades, a student must work very hard and concentrate .This means attending classes from early in the morning until late afternoon ,then doing research for projects ,then going home and doing homework .It's a busy schedule for anyone .For someone trying to hold down a job ,it's even harder .Students need all energy for their studies .If they're working after class at night ,they're going to be tired the next day .They won't be able to concentrate .This will have a negative impact on their learning ,and eventually on their grades.

Having a job can also disrupt a teenager's home life .families spend less an less time together .If a teenager has a job to go to after school, he won't be home for dinner He won't be home after dinner, either ,  and  ,ay not get home until late at night .This means he doesn't have a lot of time to spend with his family. If he doesn't have a   car, it can mean changes in his parents' schedules, too .they have to drive him to work and pick them up.

The main drawback of a teenager having a job while he's still a student is that he's missing out on the fun of being young. He has  a whole lifetime in which he'll have to earn a living .This is the last free time he'll have It's the last chance he'll have to hang out with friends and jus enjoy himself .Soon enough he will have to worry about paying the rent and buying food.

Jobs bring money  ,but money isn't everything .A teenager with a job gives up too much .No one should spend all his time at work ,and especially not a teenager.

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New factories often bring many good things to a community, such as jobs and increased prosperity. However, in my opinion, the benefits of having a factory are outweighed by risks. That is why i oppose the plan to build a factory near my community.

I believe that this city would be harmed by a large factory  .In particular , a factory would destroy the quality of the air and water in town .Factories bring smog and pollution .In the long run ,the environment will be hurt and people's heath will be affected. Having a factory is not worth that risk.

Of course, more jobs will be created by the factory. Our population will grow .To accommodate more workers, more homes and stores will be needed. Do we really want this much growth, so fast? If our town is going to grow, i would prefer slow growth with good planning .I don't want to see rows of cheaply constructed townhouses. Our quality of life must be considered.

I believe that this growth will change our city too much .I love my hometown because it is safe, small town .It is also easy to travel here .If we must expand to hold new citizens, the small-town feel will be gone. I would miss that greatly.

A factory would be helpful in some ways. However, I feel that the danger is greater than the benefits. I cannot support a plan to build a factory here, and hope that others feel the same way.        

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