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楼主
发表于 2007-8-7 10:52:00 | 只看该作者

8。17 考 拼拼凑凑处女作 帮忙看看吧

It is better to make friends with intelligence people than with people who have a sense of humor

Nowadays, a growing number of people express a strong desire to make friends with intelligence people rather than with people who have a sense of humor. Since intelligence friends can benefit people in various ways, from where I stand, I strongly believe that it is better to make friends with intelligence people than with people who have a sense of humor.

To begin with, people can learn a lot from intelligence people. People can learn many practical skills from them, such as critical thinking, logical analysis and creative problem solving methods. Take my own experience for illustration. Susan is my best friend and she is a person with great wisdom. From her, I learnt how to keep calm while I confront difficulties. From her, I learnt how to make an effective and detailed analysis before making the final decision. From her, I learnt how to contact with different kinds of people adroitly. Obviously, intelligent friends can indeed benefit people a lot.

Furthermore, people prefer to cooperate with intelligent people. In other words, though people who own a strong sense of humor is beneficial for recreation and relaxation, intelligence people is preferable for cooperation and discussion. When you meet a difficult problem, you can consult the intelligence friends for help. When you are confused by a difficult task, you can discuss the problem with intelligent friends and analyze the problem thoroughly. When we feel dismay about you work, the support of intelligence friends can make you become more confident about the future.

Finally, though I emphasize the importance of intelligence friends, I also admit that a sense of humor is also a necessary and indispensable consideration for people to evaluate friends. Humor friends make people feel happy and funny through interesting stories or though-provoking jokes. But compared with the numerous advantages of intelligence friends, the merits of humorous friends are in minor.

From the discussion above, we can safely draw the conclusion that though the sense of humor is important, it never takes the first place of people’s consideration. Instead, intelligence is of the most importance and it is more sagacious for people to make friends with intelligence friends.


 

 
沙发
发表于 2007-8-12 16:49:00 | 只看该作者

17号考现在才处女作有晚了啵~~

文章还好啊,就是注意下主谓搭配,前后要一致哦!

板凳
发表于 2007-8-12 22:19:00 | 只看该作者
虽然时间不多了~感觉写得挺好的
地板
发表于 2007-8-14 22:08:00 | 只看该作者

你可以先参考该版置顶的帖子里边的修改集合

然后我在iBT区有一个写作的帖子,你也可以参考一下

然后发现自己的一些问题,进行修改过后再发上来

我进行具体的修改

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