[求助]综合写作 求人指点

delta 6个 模考 test2的综合写作

In the lecture, the professor argues that hydropower has some severe disadvantages in spite of certain advantages described in the passages.

The first point that the professor casts doubt on the passage is hydropower may be inconvenient for certain groups of people. He
                        illustrates that building a dam forces people living behind the dam to move. This method which is bitter and controversial certainly causes inconvenience to these people. This directly contradicts the point in the passage that hydropower reservoirs contribute to the local economy and quality of life

Secondly, although the passage states that hydroelectricity is clean and green, the professor disagrees with this point and claims hydroelectricity is hazardous to environment. He explains in details that toxic wastes become a major pollution problem and are hard to deal with. Furthermore, the ecosystem in the river is disturbed by the dam. Thus the professor states that seemingly inexpensive hydroelectricity, mentioned in the passage, has heavy long-term environmental costs

Finally, while the passage indicates that hydropower is renewable, the lecturer states it is unreliable source of fuel due to its dependence on the natural condition.

On the whole, the professor utilizes specific and convincing evidences to support the statement that hydropower has serious disadvantages, not as perfect as the passage describes.

高手们指点一下 思路正确与否 比较的写法有无问题

综合写作

只要对听力部分的复述是成功的就可以了

所谓的成功，就是：

1.没有漏掉听力中的点

2.不是照抄听力中的原文，而是有一定的改编（句式上的改编，意思不变）

用模版无所谓，综合写作完全可以用模版