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发表于 2007-7-28 10:18:00 | 只看该作者

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Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

        As an increasing number of people's pace of lives becomes faster than ever before,it is not surprise to see eating at food stands and restaurants has become a  quite popular life style.However,personally I would in favor of the more traditional way-prepare and eat food at home,for it is more hygienic,nutrient,and simply I enjoy the process to cook and prepare food.
   In the first place,there is no denying the fact that home preparing  food is more hygienic  than which provided in food stands or restaurants.Paying carefull attention on choosing the food resource,I usually buy meat and vegetable  from big super market,which have the guaratee to suply the high quality  meat and the freshest vegetables without the pollution of pesticides.Also,washing and cleaning the food is another step of importance in determining whether the food is hygioenic.Compared to the home preparing food,restaurant and food stands usually pay little attention about these two crucial steps,for their mian purpose is to make profit,they are more likely to  chooce the resources which are cheaper,and clean them only in a short time as doing the daily routin.It is not the first time  I read from the news paper report that some restaurants use the  refined oil or even some restraunts but the dead chichen only for the pursuit of higher profit.To make sure that the food is hygienit enough,I would chooce eating at home.
   In the second place,It is easier to meet individul's special nutriment needs as we prepare and eat food at home.Every individual has his or her own nutriment neads because people's health condition defer from person to person.Although the dishes in restaurant vary,it is comparaly fixed in to several style of dishes,with the recipe changing little from time to time,so it can't meet everyone's special needs. But at home,people can produce their own diet that fits themselves most.Especially when people have particular diseases just like hypertension,they are in the urgent to make their own diet,such as try to avoid the food with high oil and Calorie.
   Furthurmore,for me it is such a enjoyable thing to cook with creativity and share the food with my family and friends.
   Admittedly,Preparing food at home also have some demerit aspects.For example,it costs people more time,but as cooking is such a enjoyable thing,I don't think it is a big problem.
   To sum up,as what has been discussed abouve,we may safely draw the conclution that cooking at home have many advantages,which can't be replaced by eating outside,so I suggest people to share more of their time eating at home with their families.

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

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发表于 2007-7-28 19:37:00 | 只看该作者
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