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楼主
发表于 2003-11-23 01:27:00 | 只看该作者

请教一道作文题!

155 .Plants can provide food, shelter, clothing, or medicine. What is one kind of plant that is important to you or the people in your country? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

的确不会写哦!

还有那个写动物的,俺也不知该写哪个好
沙发
发表于 2003-11-23 09:41:00 | 只看该作者
套用魔板:

There are some people who plant A is important,but others prefer to plant B. I would have to say that, if I were faced with this issue, plant A(B) is more important to me or the people in my country . In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my viewpoint.

No issue is more important now than the one that refers to one of benifits of growing plantA(B). History witnesses and presents many examples。这里举例子。。。Don’t you think these examples quoted above are very persuasive?

one merit of plantA(B) is another head and chief reason that I have chosen to put here. It is no better illustration that can demonstrate the view(这句话怪怪的,不用也罢)。这里举例子。。。 If you can see that, you can understand it more deeply.

Superior as plantA(B) is, however, plantA(B)  also has its own demerits, too. 这里举例子。。。。Nevertheless, the advantages of plantA(B) carry more weight than that of disadvantage of  plantA(B), so the most striking conclusion is obvious.

To sum up, given the reasons discussed above, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we can safely reach the conclusion that plant A(B) is more important to me or the people in my country.   In fact, not only do I prefer to plantA(B), but also prefer to growing  as many plantA(B) as possible.  


虽然不是很漂亮的文章,但大体上就是这样了, 在细节上把你认为不合适的句子去掉,再加上一些自己的句子就可以了。 我想弄个4.5分应该可以的。











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板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2003-11-23 11:01:00 | 只看该作者
谢谢楼上的朋友,我倒不是对文章结构有疑问,而是不知该写什么植物和动物,不知哪个好写.感觉无从下笔
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