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There are some people who plant A is important,but others prefer to plant B. I would have to say that, if I were faced with this issue, plant A(B) is more important to me or the people in my country . In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my viewpoint.
No issue is more important now than the one that refers to one of benifits of growing plantA(B). History witnesses and presents many examples。这里举例子。。。Don’t you think these examples quoted above are very persuasive?
one merit of plantA(B) is another head and chief reason that I have chosen to put here. It is no better illustration that can demonstrate the view(这句话怪怪的，不用也罢）。这里举例子。。。 If you can see that, you can understand it more deeply.
Superior as plantA(B) is, however, plantA(B) also has its own demerits, too. 这里举例子。。。。Nevertheless, the advantages of plantA(B) carry more weight than that of disadvantage of plantA(B), so the most striking conclusion is obvious.
To sum up, given the reasons discussed above, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we can safely reach the conclusion that plant A(B) is more important to me or the people in my country. In fact, not only do I prefer to plantA(B), but also prefer to growing as many plantA(B) as possible.
虽然不是很漂亮的文章，但大体上就是这样了， 在细节上把你认为不合适的句子去掉，再加上一些自己的句子就可以了。 我想弄个4.5分应该可以的。
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