[求助] 恳求小猪老师的批改建议。

看了小猪的帖子很受启发。

月底就要考试了，但是感觉作文水平还是不行。

肯请小猪老师提出宝贵的建议。

    Planning or not planning for your leisure time?

Currently, The society is so competitive that the leisure time is very precious for most of workers who suffer a lot of pressure during their good time. How to enjoy the leisure time is really complicate question which has different answer for different person.

    It is a good choice to make a plan to spend one's spare time. The tasks which most of works deals with during their work time are not easy to handle and often cost a large number of time and energy. And it is hardly to find some time to do something that the works really want to do, such as shopping, watching movie, meeting good friends. On the other hand, the leisure time is always very short, which is often two day per week. So if we can arrange a good plan, we could spend our leisure time more effectively, and finish a lot of tasks that we really want to do but have no adequate time to do during work time.

    Some others may prefer spend their leisure time more freely, rather that to be confined by schedule. They just like to do what they like. For these people, they might be sitting down on the chair in the park to spend the whole afternoon and enjoy the sun shine or just lie in the bed in the whole weekend. For them, they might argue that it may give them a feeling that there are still at working during their leisure time, if they spend their leisure time also according a schedule.

    It is might not a wise choice that spending the leisure without plan. The person who has no plan might waste some precious time on some no meaning things. It is believed that to keep the advantage over others in the intense competition in the society, every one should improve personal quality by studying every day. If we use the time more effectively, there will be more time left for us to use to study, and we will benefit a lot from our good plan. Above all making a plan is really pretty good choice compared the other.

噢··天啦········忙不过来了······

为小猪老师的精神感动.................

理解小猪老师的苦衷。时间允许的话，还是希望得到小猪老师的建议

Always, in this much-changing world we, no matter students or teachers, blue collars or white collars, and those politicians, of course,  have to face the intense stress triggered by the fast pace society. In the light of such a situation, leisure time which I deem as something of great importance for it can help one release the pressure has become more and more precious. Some may be too slothful to make a plan for their pathetically limited leisure time but dissipate it without any plan, then, they find nothing is done and they hardly have obtained something meaningful in the duration of the leisure time. Well, now my perspective is becoming manifest-plan, elaborate plan is indispensable if one wants to enjoy a period of pleasant leisure time.