流利和连贯性仍需加强,另外请注意intonation,另外ms有一些语法错误和chinglish存在,比如what is being happened,
另外,my marriage partner should have three qualities is responsibility, consideration,.....语法首先有问题, 应该是 three qualities my partner should have are ..., 而且应该用being considerate 表示善解人意