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题目：AD：There are times when lying acceptable

It becomes widely held that lying is acceptable nowadays especially large number of dealers believe that lying bring more money to them. Therefore there is no evidence shows that lying can reinforce our relationship, inversion we usually hear that it diminishes people's relationship. Due to there is no reliability of dishonesty people. I disagree with the view that lying is recipient in our society thoroughly.

Firstly, when I deal things with people, I do not expect chest me. Once they lie me, there is no feasibility that we can rely each other. Some people take lying for granted that they often lie to their parents as well as their teachers. When the teacher ask them to accomplish their assignment, they always primrose that they can finish on time. Consequently they never finish on time. As a long term it will have severe effect on their study. Latest surveys show that increasing number of cubs complain that their friendship deteriorated. I believe there is no denying fact that most of their friendship ruined by not telling the truth to friends. In other word, there are troubles around our relationship imputes to lying.

Besides, we can not emphasis the importance of honesty too much on business field. When a businessman lie to their customers, it is conceivable that they will incapable in coping with their foes. When there is no honesty there is no business. One of the most principal rules in business which you must comply is keep honesty forever.

Besides, we can not emphasis the importance of honesty too much on business field. When a businessman lie to their customers, it is conceivable that they will incapable in coping with their foes. When there is no honesty there is no business. One of the most principal rules in business which you must comply is keep honesty forever.

On the other hand some people maintain in some cases we are forced to lie, as an example is when one's friend catch serious illness, we can not tell him the truth for when he know the truth it will deteriorate his situation. Notwithstanding it seems we can not keep honesty forever, I hold that more truth you talk to your friends more solid friendships you can derive. To sum up, lying poses a great treat to our relationships, as long as you want retain the relationship, tell the truth is the best way.

On the other hand some people maintain in some cases we are forced to lie, as an example is when one's friend catch serious illness, we can not tell him the truth for when he know the truth it will deteriorate his situation. Notwithstanding it seems we can not keep honesty forever, I hold that more truth you talk to your friends more solid friendships you can derive. To sum up, lying poses a great treat to our relationships, as long as you want retain the relationship, tell the truth is the best way.

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 Therefore there is no evidence showing that lying can reinforce our relationship, and inversely we usually hear that it diminishes people's relationship.

Due to there is no reliability of dishonesty people. Due to 是介词短语，不能加句子，自己也不能成为一个句子。要加得这样：It is due to the fact that there is no reliability of dishonesty people.

 I disagree with the view that lying is recipient in our society thoroughly. recipient是“接受者”的意思，放在这里莫名其妙。

Firstly, when I deal things with people, I do not expect chest me. chest放在这里莫名其妙. things删除。

Once they lie me, there is no feasibility that we can rely each other. feasibility 是“可行性”的意思，这用“可能性”应该更加准确。

When a businessman lies to their customers, it is conceivable that they will be incapable in coping with their foes. 这里楼主考虑过用虚拟语气吗? foes多用于中世纪的敌人，在商海当中，用opponent；adversary； competitor；俺还从来没在MBA的书中看到foe。

错误还有很多，不一一指出啦。楼主基本语法问题明显。

给楼主打分21....

哎。。。。果然错的多啊。。。。。

先谢谢扛不住了！