(AAB3)急问：AA新3思路

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The following appeared in a memorandum from the information technology department of a major advertising firm:

“The more efficient a firm’s employees are, the more profitable that firm will be. Improvements in a firm’s information technology hardware and software are a proven way to increase the efficiency of employees who do the majority of their work on computers. Therefore, if our firm invests in the most powerful and advanced information technology available, employee productivity will be maximized. This strategy ensures that every dollar spent on enhanced information technology will help to increase our firm’s profit margins.”

Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc

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The first questionable assumption in this argument is that the firm will be more profit simply because its efficient rises. We have to notice that not only the may increased revenues from increased efficient, but also the cost and expense are key factors in determining a firm’s profit performance. What if, the cost of production raises together with the maximized the productivity? The assumption will be a sound one only when all the other factors keep constant while the increased efficiency promotes the employee’s productivity. However, we can not see other factors, such the costs of the firm, are constant as the proposition implement. In fact, the cost of business running is seriously increased, because the most powerful and advanced information technology is usually very expensive too.

Another questionable in this argument is the most powerful and advanced information technology will certainly result in maximized employee productivity. Generally it is true that the improved information technology will improve the efficiency of employees, but a company should always the most suitable one, rather than the most advanced one. The more advance the information technology is, the more time the employees will take for training and getting used of it. If it takes an employee 3 months or even more to learning a new information technology, will the production efficiency improved also?  

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