T164,保持健康的话题，我觉得写得不好，但不知道该怎么改，请大家忙里偷闲给看看吧

164. People do many different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, people pay more and more attentions to their health. But which methods of how to keep good health are different from one others, it depends on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern. From my place of viewpoint, there are a large number of things could help you for your good health.

In the first place, sports and exercise bring me lot of benefits I am customed to going walk in the morning and roaming after supper. Besides, I go to the gymnasium two or three times a week. Climbing and swimming are also two sports I usually do in the weekend. Those keep my body full of energy.

Secondly, a health and balance diet is as important as, if not more important than the first point. As for me, I have a nice breakfast every morning, which can provide me for sufficient energy for my working before noon. Of course to make it possible, I cannot get up too late. I have no much time at noon, so I have had some easy but healthy food for lunch. I never have food before sleeping, because it is surely do harm to the stomach.

Last but not least, I consider an active attitude towards the life is also quite important. Never angry with others, even they make big mistake. It have no value to punish myself for others' mistake.

That's what I do for my health. Now I am happy, healthy and energetic. If you are disturbed by illness and no so happy, why won't you do follow what I said?

总觉得不是那个味，大侠们请不吝赐教，谢过！！

That's what I do for my health. Now I am happy, healthy and energetic. If you are disturbed by illness and no so happy, why won't you do follow what I said?

总觉得不是那个味，大侠们请不吝赐教，谢过！！

第一段：pay more and more attention, 不要s.

But which methods of how to keep good health are different from one others, it depends on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern.

这句话感觉问题蛮多。首先：不要which。which 不能说be different吧。另外：one others-> one another. 再者：两个分句之间不能没有连接词，这句话可以在都好后面加上and.

From my place of viewpoint??自己造的还是真的有这个说法？I prefer: From my point of view

In the first place, sports and exercise bring me lot of benefits. I am customed to going walk(ing) in the morning and roaming after supper. Besides, I go to the gymnasium two or three times a week. Climbing and swimming are also the two sports I usually do in the weekend. Those keep my body full of energy. (感觉句子有些松，没有很好的句型结构。句子太简单，建议多用些从句。整段似乎太简单了。。。要加强英语写作啊！多读些范文)

Secondly, a health and balance diet is of equal importance, if not more important than the first point. As for me, I have a nice breakfast every morning, which can provide me (for deleted)sufficient energy for my working before noon. Of course to make it possible (感觉这句话不是很好), I cannot get up too late. I have no much time （I do not have much time）at noon, so I have had some easy but healthy food for lunch. I never have food before sleeping, because it is surely do harm to the stomach. (还是句型简单，没有变化感)

感谢yyallez，

很感动被这样仔细的批改

我怕时间不够，所以各段先写主题句，在看着时间往里凑，看来这样做有问题！

多谢指点 我修改好在发给大家批评