Living room, the most important room in a house, is a place in which (where) all the family members chat with each other, take relax (take time to relax) and recreational activities, or meet friends and guests.(make sure that the structure is in parallel form) Apparently(incorrect word, you can use after all) , it performs various functions and meets multiple demands. >>
>>The principle reason for me to choose it is that the activities in living room help (to) build up a more cohesive family in which every member understands, respects, and loves each other. Unlike in other rooms such as bedroom, where people live separately, in the living room families spend most time together and do something (perhaps “activities” is a better one) in common such as play cards, watch TV series, or talk something funny(don’t use “something” you can say, share funny stories, etc,). All the time spent together can leave behind unforgettable and cozy memories which bond together all the family(??). For example, even many years later, I still remember that all my families watched Shanghaitan together, one of the famous Hongkong TV series, and we raved about the famous hongkong actor Runfa Chow at that time. The memory is so vivid not as much because of the content of the TV program itself as because of the good time we once spent together. >>
>>Aside from resulting in a warm group, the activities in living room could also contribute to the health of individuals. In today’s society, people confront more pressures and anxieties than ever and hence need (to) pay more attention to relaxation. To great extent, the function of living room can satisfy people’s need. They can ease their tension and stress through some indoor activities such as playing games, watching TV, or just lying on the sofa just as I always do after work. Admittedly, like living room, bedroom is also an ideal place to relax. However, commonsense tells us that people is hard (is having difficulty) to fall asleep when they are faced with tension. In contrast, proper indoor activities in living room invariably create more satisfactory effects (to…..). >>
Last but not least, living room is also an integral part of people’s social life. More often than not, people invite friends to their home and enjoy themselves in living room. In contrast with other rooms, living room is more appropriate for recreational activities with friends such as playing chess, chatting, or holding various kinds of parties. For one thing, it is usually more spacious. For another, (??? For another?? Use some other words) people still keep their own privacy from being invaded even while a lot of friends are having fun in living room.
Although other rooms, such as bedroom and dining room, also play an important role in people’s life, by comparison living room better satisfies the a (the a??) wording) variety of demand of people as both natural and social existence. |