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楼主
发表于 2005-9-3 09:52:00 | 只看该作者

twe100 please give suggestions


100 Some people think that governments should spend as much money as possible on developing or buying computer technology. Other people disagree and think that this money should be spent on more basic needs. Which one of these opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.



Currently, there are two opinions about the spending of government’s money: developing high computer technology and buying basic needs. In my opinion, how to spend the money should depend on the actual or local conditions.



For the rich areas, the government should spend the money on the high technology. High technology is very important to keep the government among the front of others and, most importantly, it can bring a lot of profit. For example, in most of eastern cities of China, like Wuxi, Suzhou, Zhenjiang etc., many international companies invest here and make the people around these area very rich. At the same time, they bring a lot of taxes to government. In order to keep the competitive, the investment of government, or even the private companies, should be in the super technology, like the computer, communications, network, etc.



On the other hand, the basic needs, such as food, clothes, and living conditions, should be considered firstly. It is hard to image that people can develop the high technology without enough food or clothes. A very good example for this is in the western area of China. The people are poor, the society is unstable, unemployment and crime rates are high. All of these will demand the government to spend more money to improve the basic condition or environment.



How to properly spend the money is not easy but is very important. The wise way can obtain unexpected results. Summarily, the government should consider the local condition to allocate their money on computer technology or basic needs.

沙发
发表于 2005-9-5 14:25:00 | 只看该作者

关于disagree/agree题型,必须选择其中一个观点,即同意或不同意,注意审题


Which one of these opinions do you agree with?


可以选择两者观点的,是选择的题型。


另外,你应当看一看别人的文章,你的开头太短,不太好。


板凳
发表于 2005-9-6 07:00:00 | 只看该作者

我觉得搂主的文章如果再长一点就是6分的作文,因为看过XDF的一篇6分的作文,从中性的角度出发,不过句型比较简单,单词也不够层次。


好文章,不过这样的中性写法有时候很容易倒。还是很不错的!


地板
 楼主| 发表于 2005-9-8 08:25:00 | 只看该作者
I am confused for what you two said.Anyway, thank you!
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