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TWE093 请各位发表一下意见,能得4分吗?

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发表于 2005-8-16 17:42:00 | 只看该作者

TWE093 请各位发表一下意见,能得4分吗?

93. Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important.




TWE93


What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate is a hot topic among people who have to live with roommates. As far as I am concerned, however, I think that having a kind heart, be conversational, and be tidy are three most crucial qualities of a good roommate. I will provide evidence to support my argument as follows.



First and foremost, nothing is more important than the one that a roommate is kind hearted. Facts witness and present many examples. Having a golden hearted roommate, I could be attended when I am badly ill; having a kind hearted roommate, I could turn to him for help when I have mathematical or other assignment problems; having a thoughtful roommate, I could ask him to pick up me when I caught in the rain outside. Don’t you think the examples quoted above are very persuasive?



Being conversational is another important quality that I have chosen to put here. I am a person having no much words, so, I wish to have a roommate who is conversational to talk with me now and then, especially when I feel lonely. Moreover, I also could learn to speak more and change myself to a conversational person, too.



In addition, my roommate should be tidy to some extent. Since I wish I could have a wonderful circumstance to live and study in my room, I wish my roommate also be a tidy person. For instance, do not throw paper or other rubbish on the floor, change and wash clothes regularly, and so on.



To sum up, for all the arguments mentioned above, I would draw a conclusion that kind hearted, be conversational, and be tidy are the most important qualities of a good roommate, I think.



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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2005-8-17 11:17:00 | 只看该作者
板凳
发表于 2005-8-17 11:34:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用aobing在2005-8-16 17:42:00的发言:

93. Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important.




TWE93


What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate is a hot topic among people who have to live with roommates. As far as I am concerned, however, I think that having a kind heart, be conversational, and be tidy are three most crucial qualities of a good roommate. I will provide evidence to support my argument as follows.



First and foremost, nothing is more important than the one that a roommate is kind hearted. Facts witness and present many examples. Having a golden hearted roommate, I could be attended when I am badly ill; having a kind hearted roommate, I could turn to him for help when I have mathematical or other assignment problems; having a thoughtful roommate, I could ask him to pick up me when I caught in the rain outside. Don’t you think the examples quoted above are very persuasive?



Being conversational is another important quality that I have chosen to put here. I am a person having no much words, so, I wish to have a roommate who is conversational to talk with me now and then, especially when I feel lonely. Moreover, I also could learn to speak more and change myself to a conversational person, too.



In addition, my roommate should be tidy to some extent. Since I wish I could have a wonderful circumstance to live and study in my room, I wish my roommate also be a tidy person. For instance, do not throw paper or other rubbish on the floor, change and wash clothes regularly(祁使句?), and so on.



To sum up, for all the arguments mentioned above, I would draw a conclusion that kind hearted, be conversational, and be tidy are the most important qualities of a good roommate, I think.




文法错误多了点。考试时可要再仔细些。

地板
 楼主| 发表于 2005-8-17 15:29:00 | 只看该作者
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