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Today, our people confront two options: one is to plan activities for their free time very carefully; the other is not to make any plans at all for their free time. Different people might hold different opinions on this issue due to their distinct experiences and backgrounds. If I were faced this issue, I would be strongly in favor of planning time very carefully for leisure time rather than making no plan at all for leisure time. In the next few minutes, I would like to reason and provide concrete evidence to support my point as follows.

The first plain truth, I am presenting here, is that planning leisure time carefully can maximize the usage of time and improve the efficiency of leisure activities. Planning leisure carefully is able to save a lot of time for us, as a result we can greatly enjoy our vacation time. For instance, last year,  I took family to a trip to Montreal. I found all the information about the city and the most interest places I would like to visit from the internet in advance. Further more, I used Google to find all the information, so I could  plan my driving route, where I was going to take a rest and what hotel I was going to stay. Apparently, I saved a lot time by doing the plan in advance. On the contrary, one of my friend, he did not plan his trip at all, he spent numerous time to check the map on his way and looked for hotel aimlessly. Eventually, he did not have sufficient time to enjoy the beautiful sceneries.  As all we known, time is money, time is everything. A person with no idea of planning the time is believed to be a unfortunate victim of adverse circumstances deprived of a wide assortment of opportunities in the twenty-first century. Therefore, the most striking conclusion is obvious, we all should plan leisure time carefully in order to save time.

Furthermore, behind my preference lies the fact that a lot of your money could be saved just by planning your leisure time in advance. In fact, most of hotel offer discount for those who reserve the room in advance; The airline companies also give good price to the customers who book the ticket early. By doing that, we can use the saved money to buy books or to plan another trip to make our lives better.

Last but not the least, we can avoid hassles during our leisure time by making a good plan. Supposed, you were in Oshaga beach for a vacation. Once you reached the place, you were told all the room had been reserved by the other people. That is why we should learn from the other people’s mistake. I believe, make a plan for the leisure time is the best choice.

Admittedly, it will occupy some leisure time to make a leisure time plan. However, the advantages of making plan for leisure time outweighs it's disadvantages.

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