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求大神帮忙看看这2个句子如何改好?

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发表于 2013-7-15 22:17:02 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
TPO1的综合作文中我写的两句很别扭的句子:
The professor points out that the more free time a worker can attain, the higher risk his career is at, for companies intend to fire workers with less output first during depression.


What's more, if leaders are considering promoting someone, they incline to pass over workerswho work four-day a week, because they prefer managers with a full coverage ofall workdays.


请问be动词和实意动词是不是不能平行哇?

求帮忙改改这两个句子,谢谢大家哇
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