TWE 139 the most important room

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139 What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? Why is this room more important to you than any other room? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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At home, nobody can ignore the importance of the rooms: meeting visitors in the living room, cooking in the kitchen, and sleeping in the bedroom. Lacking one of them home is not really home—the safe shelter where people can enjoy their family life. However, when coming to an intriguing discussion—the most important room in a house, I do not hesitate to choose my favorite: the washroom for the following reasons.

To begin with, the washroom functions as a result of the physical demand. Like eating, egesting is also part of the biological pattern. Unlike other functions of the rooms such as the kitchen where people cook, but they can barbeque outdoor instead of in the kitchen, the function of washroom cannot be replaced. It is the only place to connect the draining system, thereby fulfilling people’s physical needs.

Next, the washroom is a relaxed place as well. After working a whole day, people feel exhausted and stressful, and the excretion attaining on the skin leads to more uncomfortable. However, having shower can relieve such tension of mind and speed up the blood cycle. The faster blood cycle, in turn, enforces make body more relaxed, and enhance results in more relaxed in the mind. This unique function in the washroom brings the special statue in a house.

In addition, the washroom is also a supplementing water source. The kitchen is a main water source for cooking, but the extra water source is needed when some situations happen. For example, when the water tapes do not work or need to be fixed, or when a large amount of water is needed immediately, the washroom will play an important role in approaching these situations.

Therefore, the washroom is the most important room in my house. I can sleep in the living room, meet my friend in my bedroom, or cooking outside, but I have to go to washroom and have shower in the washroom, since other rooms cannot replace it.

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likui

好文！

valarie

I would like to do some editing for you but I don't know how to edit it here. 如何显示删去的部分和自己的改动的部分？

guandream

thanks.

you just need go to my post and click " ", and you can begin to edit the essay.

guandream

if edited a little more, it can be 6.0

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emma-maple

Good article! Thanks for sharing it with us. It's not easy to discuss the wash room. Dispite egesting and showering, what I thought is that wash room is the first room to go to in the morning for majority of people. Washing face and brushing teeth make people feel refreshed in the morning. Smiling to the image of oneself in the mirror brings people pleasure mood. Therefore, the wash room provide people with a good begining of a new day.     Your third statement shows me a new opnion.  Thanks a lot.