2月20号预测机经 独立作文 三篇 求点评！

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2月20号预测机经 独立作文 三篇 求点评！

1.Do you agree the following statement? It was easier to achieve success in the past than it is today. Success is something that most people desire for, whether in the past or now. In the long history of human progress, there were many people who had got startling success, and their ways leading to the destination were different. In my opinion, contrary to the point that it was easier to achieve success in the past than it is today, it is easier to succeed in the modern society because of these reasons below. First of all, I would like to talk about the education availability in different period periods. In the past, college education was a symbol of wealth and fame as well as a person's social status. The poor who wanted to attend university over the past might only relish that feat in their dream. In contrast, universities open to aspiring students all over the world nowadays, and fundamental education for children is guaranteed by governments. That means young people would have more open mind and innovative thinking, which could translate into more success. Secondly, another reason is that there are more opportunities in modern society. Since the development due to market economy happens worldwide, more jobs are created. For example, since China’s admission to WTO, there have been 1,174,000 more job opportunities added to the Chinese market annually. Furthermore, the developing outsourcing industry also created a great deal of jobs for people. That means more approaches to success are clear at a glance. If you can see that, you can understand it more deeply Finally, as a result of the fast growing pressure on people from the advanced society, people will have the built-in urge to move forward. That would be the major emotional factor which is quite pivotal and leads to success. Survival is no longer an easy topic for people, especially for Chinese, in contrast to people who were guaranteed food and clothing by the government over the past decades. It was said:” More enterprises lead to more successes.”, and now the conclusion is obvious. In conclusion, although the title statement might still raise disagreement among different people, it’s clear at the moment when taking into all the reasons above-mentioned. These points intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become persuasive, we can arrive at the conclusion that it is easier to achieve success today than it was before. 2.Should children spend most time playing and studying or required to help the family with household chores like cooking and cleaning? It’s hard to say whether kids should spend more time on playing and studying or household chores is further beneficial. Both of them play a crucial role in children’s essential personality development. In my opinion, the point is to find the adequate balance. Kids should go farther in neither of them. Undeniable, book is the best way which leads to knowledge. Children get there first impression of the world from graphic books, likewise, form their imaginations from story books. As is the often the case, the more books a child reads, the more creativity he probably gets. In the other hand, I think playing game is as significant as studying for preschool kids, as the process of building up confidence and an optimistic personality. That’s also why foreign children have a better pressure-resistance in contrast to Chinese children, as always, they are more confident. However, As I mentioned before, helping with housework is necessary either. For example, it’s obvious that teenager from ritual area always are more independent than the others from cities, and the major factor which facilitates this phenomenon is they have to do more housework during their childhood. They’ve faced the reality of poverty since they are so young that urban children are still focused on games and so on at this age. Otherwise, Ritual children always understand responsibility deeper in contrast to urban children. They know what they crave for exactly, as which is not clear for many universities students from metropolises. After all, it’s not to say which one a child should focus on definitely. When the issue comes to me in the future, I prefer to separate my child’s off-class time into two parts. He will be required to focus on his study and he can play as well in weekdays, but weekends will be his housework time. I would like to see my boy have a balanced development on either imagination and independence, also responsibility. 3.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and televisions should always show audience good people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished. To some extent, movies and televisions are indispensable to temporary people as an existence which gratifies their fantasy. But in the other side, it’s not to say what they exclusively to show is the façade of the society. In my opinion, movies and televisions are largely tools to show positive events and to encourage people, which castes no doubt on, but it have the responsibility to show the reality of the world. First of all, [more often than not], the most kind of movies show in the cinema are science fiction films and hero films. It was said by psychologists that people who come to see these kinds of film always have great burden in life. Reasons of their preference to hero movie or science fiction movie are always their desire of being heroes in the movies, or in the other side, create a fantastic world by themselves. When watching the hero success and the bad guy is punished, people can escape from the reality for a short time, and that’s the great way to release themselves. It’s nothing to do with correcting their direction, but an approach leads to a pleasant life. However, films also have the responsibility to indicate the bad-side of the world. To teenagers who are going to attend universities or have a job, it’s necessary to tell them some of the dark-side, like the intense competitions, high rate of unemployment, exorbitant hospitalization cost, and so on. A young man with pure positive imagination of the world can’t adjust quickly, and he will be frustrated before long. Watch realistic movies will set mental preparation for them, which can help them a lot in their way. For example, my younger brother was impressive after watching the movie The Pursuit of the Happiness, and he told me he would study as hard as Will Smith works to achieve his success. From my personal perspective, I prefer to see fantastic movies than documentary films, as I’m already overstressed. In conclusion, people can not success count on watching movies, but they will get vigor and encouragement from a positive show. Another saying, teens can get in touch with the reality as early as possible from movies, which would bring them mature faster.

Judyyang

第二篇文章中农村孩子，应该为rurual而不是ritual.还有感觉定冠词用得过于频繁，个人意见仅仅供参考。