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发表于 2009-2-25 10:22:00 | 只看该作者

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Title:  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by the guide.

 

 

  It is commonly thought that traveling is a effective way to reduce the pressure from study and work, and thus a number of people would like to composing a group to travel all over the world. I am one of the people who bolster this opinion. One of my main reasons may involve the consideration that traveling with others in a group can increase people’s perspective to some extent. To prove it, people can understand different culture and knowledge during traveling, on account that various residents have different cultural as well as educational background. Consequently, traveling with others is an good approach to increase our visions.

  Secondly, the account is that traveling with others is one of the safest methods in the world. No doubt, what we can notice is that people can look after each other and have a good communication during traveling. For example, some people, because of the change of weather condition, who are under the weather during traveling. More importantly, he did not take the drug before traveling, and others will help him solve this problem, which results in a good health in the end. In contrast, he may not finish all paths of traveling.

  However, I can cast doubt on the argument conducted that traveling alone can not only have the free time but travel any place in terms with your preference as well. The first point is that tourists should be encouraged to allocate the time for having a good travel, which increases their perspectives and enhances knowledge field. In addition, I doubt that enjoying the precious scene will cultivate their aesthetic spirit and reduce the pressure from study and work. But overall, traveling alone is better than other forms in the real condition.

 My view is that traveling with others in a group is an effective way to reduce the pressure from study and work and get more entertainment can make more friends, enjoy the independent life by you, and thus people should have an independent life experience by traveling with others. Consequently, people are expected to travel with others in a group.

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发表于 2009-2-26 10:13:00 | 只看该作者

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It is commonly thought that traveling is a effective way to reduce the pressure from study and work, and thus a number of people would like to composing a group to travel all over the world. I am one of the people who bolster this opinion. One of my main reasons may involve the consideration that traveling with others in a group can increase people’s perspective to some extent. To prove it, people can understand different culture and knowledge during traveling, on account that various residents have different cultural as well as educational background. Consequently, traveling with others is an good approach to increase our visions.

  Secondly, the account is that traveling with others is one of the safest methods in the world. No doubt, what we can notice is that people can look after each other and have a good communication during traveling. For example, some people, because of the change of weather condition, who are under the weather during traveling. More importantly, he did not take the drug before traveling, and others will help him solve this problem, which results in a good health in the end. In contrast, he may not finish all paths of traveling.

  However, I can cast doubt on the argument conducted that traveling alone can not only have the free time but travel any place
                in terms with
                your preference as well. The first point is that tourists should be encouraged to allocate the time for having a good travel, which increases their perspectives and enhances knowledge field. In addition, I doubt that enjoying the precious scene will cultivate their aesthetic spirit and reduce the pressure from study and work. But overall, traveling alone is better than other forms in the real condition. (本段有点不知所云)  不知你的观点了

 My view is that traveling with others in a group is an effective way to reduce the pressure from study and work and get more entertainment can make more friends, enjoy the independent life by you, and thus people should have an independent life experience by traveling with others. Consequently, people are expected to travel with others in a group.

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