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问题
It has been said ,"not everything that is contained in the book." compare and contrast
konwledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. in your opinion ,
which source is more important?why?
作文
  Many people think experience is more important than learning from books. i do not consider
so ,however. In my opinion ,hardly things they can compare with books.Learning from books
will boost your speed that to konw the world around you .Also,books could make
learning more safe.And we can prevent us from danger that we have not experience.
  Learning from books can save time .when we learning from experience ,we have to experience
various of subjects and a large sum of time .Nevertheless,learning from books just cost several
half time of learning from exprience .
  What is more ?learning from books let us catch konwledge in a security way. For instance ,
it is said people would not die if he fall down from 3 flower.We can sit in the  frist flower
room ,which is completely without any risk, to know this thing .Inthe contray, in the learning
from exprience measure ,we have to try it!
  Finally,books teach us to deal with problems taht we have not experience ,like ,i am 19-years-old
boy,and i will never konw what will happen to me when i was old untill after 40 years, but books tell me
that conceivable i will be a weak old man,so i can buy an insurence now.
  In a word,despite learning from books have some disadvantages ,such as not everything is included in the
books.The meathod of learing from books is still more advanced than learning from experince.