10.6 机经的作文，请修改，多谢

kabob

: To award student's efforts or achievement, which one is better?

How should we award student's efforts or achievement? Due to different backgrounds and various angles, every people may hold their different views. Some may suggests to provide a prize, or some kind of honor or other practical things. As far as I am concerned, I think the better one is to provide a chance. My reasons are as follows.

First, to award someone, the best way is to give them something they most need. Most students make efforts or achievement just because they like it, or in another way to say, they are interested in it. So, they will be very happy if have a chance to go further on the same way because that is what they are eager to do.  To different students, chance perhaps has various meaning, it may be a better education, or a recommendation, or just attending a contest. We should consider it case by case.

Secondly, to award a chance for someone’s efforts or achievement will have positive effects to other students either. Chance is more valuable than any other awards to most students, because they are pursuing the rare chance. Awarding chance  to someone will set up a good example to all students, they will know what is right or what should be imitated. By doing so, it will pour energy  of competition to students, which will drive them to make more efforts or achievement. All will think it is fair, and agree that the awarded students deserve it.

Thirdly, it is better to chance itself.  To some prepared students, chance means success. On the contrary, to other students who are not prepared well, it just means to watch a good chance pass by. The prepared students will most cherish the chance and make the best utilization of it. If a chance could be used to help one success, it would be a success to chance itself.

In conclusion, to award student's efforts or achievements, a chance will be better.

star9918

How should we award student's efforts or achievement? Due to different backgrounds and various angles, every people may hold their different views. Some may suggests to provide a prize, or some kind of honor or other practical （material可能更好一点）things. As far as I am concerned, I think the better one is to provide a chance（个人觉得这个statement不是很清晰，chance是个满大的概念噢，虽然后面说明白了，但这里能不能说得更清楚点）. My reasons are as follows.

First, to award someone, the best way is to give them something they most need. Most students make efforts or achievement just because they like it, or in another way to say, they are interested in it. So, they will be very happy if have a chance to go further on the same way because that is what they are eager to do.  To different students, chance perhaps has various meaning, it may be a better education, or a recommendation, or just attending a contest. We should consider it case by case.

Secondly, to award a chance for someone’s efforts or achievement will have positive effects to other students either. Chance is more valuable than any other awards to most students, because they are pursuing the rare chance. Awarding chance  to someone will set up a good example to all students, they will know what is right or what should be imitated. By doing so, it will pour energy  of competition to students, which will drive them to make more efforts or achievement. All will think it is fair, and agree that the awarded students deserve it.

Thirdly, it is better to chance itself.  To some prepared students, chance means success. On the contrary, to other students who are not prepared well, it just means to watch a good chance pass by. The prepared students will most cherish the chance and make the best utilization of it. If a chance could be used to help one success, it would be a success to chance itself.

In conclusion, to award student's efforts or achievements, a chance will be better.

限时的吧，Good luck !

stonealone

是不是偏题了？题目是奖励学生作出的努力还是奖励学生做出的成就， 而不是说要奖励什么。