丫头IBT互助小组第一次作业

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独立作文： People prefer others to make decisions for than rather than make decisions themselves , do you AGREE?

(1月19日机经)

综合写作ONGMAN 写作特训 SECTION1. THE ADVANTAGES OF INTERNET

口语:

口语题目：

1 你最想去那个地方旅游，为什么？

2 你是否同意：童年是一个人一生当中最美好的时光

因为大家的发音并不是口语得高分的障碍,所以本小组主要针对口语思路和内容的提高,请小组成员将口语内容按时间严格计算,并以文字或提纲的形式上交作业

lisa829

okay

收到 晚上交

liluyuanlove

收到,明天交

lisa829

我也明天交

dancewithme

赞！加油～～

p.s. 规定人数伐？

lxzjojo

哈，这种方式真好，各位好好加油~~来支持一下哈

liluyuanlove

提前交作业啦,这是我第一次写ibt作文...希望大家狠狠地批...

Task: people prefer others to make decisions for them rather than make decisions themselves, do you AGREE?

             I agree that people prefer others to make decisions for them rather than make decisions themselves. The reasons are that people can show their abilities and intelligence, improve themselves and avoid being restricted by the decisions others made via making their own decisions.

              First, people are able to reveal their capabilities by making the decisions themselves. As we know, to make a successful decision take large amounts of work, including analyzing the current situation, forecasting the future condition as well as allowing for the resolution to the contingency. All of these measure a person’s ability to make a triumphant decision. If some body is capable, he can handle the work easily and succeed in the end.

         

              Second, making people’s own decision will help them to improve themselves. To get the decision successful, people should keep training themselves with the ability of analysis and judgment. For an instance, people may try to analyze the same issue in different situations, so that they can understand the distinct results in the diverse and find the optimal decision. Obviously, people enhance themselves by the trainings and decision-making.

             

              Third, people can avoid being limited by other’s decisions. Sometimes the decisions, which others make, are likely to go beyond or restrain people’s ability, at this time, people will feel frustrated and are not able to exert their intelligence. It’s very troublesome in this situation.

          

              Taking into account of all these aspects, I consider that people prefer to make their own decisions.

 

Task: A place to travel to

Opinion: Hainan

Supporting: 1.It is near the sea. Enough sunshine and cool sea breeze. I can go swimming in the sea or bask on the beach. Very enjoyable

                   2.Temperature is around 20 to 30. Neither too cold nor to hot. I feel Comfortable to live there.

                   3.People live there are very nice. If I had some problem, they would always help me enthusiastically.

Task: Weather childhood is the best time in your life

Opinion: Yes

Supporting: 1. There is no pressure to me in the childhood. Everyday life is relaxed. I am able to play games all the time

                   2. I have a lot of good friends. We were innocent at that time and I could always play with them. Bring me a lot of fun

summertea66

作业是这周的吗？我要申请晚点交了，今天和明天还有后天我都有很重要的事情要去办，很占用时间。星期三傍晚之前要去找教授谈话。之后就轻松了……

最晚能什么时候交? （还有：以后这样的情况基本不会出现,这周是特殊情况）

dancewithme

刚搜了下，原来要报名的，错过了，可惜～

小组成员加油加油！

丫头宝宝宝贝

来修改喽!
    

Task: people prefer others to make decisions for them rather than make decisions themselves, do you AGREE?

             I agree that people prefer others to make decisions for them rather than make decisions themselves. (这句话的意思是倾向于别人为自己来做决定?)The reasons are that people can show their abilities and intelligence, improve themselves and avoid being restricted by the decisions others made via making their own decisions.

              First, people are able to reveal their capabilities by making the decisions themselves. As we know, to make a successful decision(这里似乎需要一个连词) take large amounts of work, including analyzing the current situation, forecasting the future condition as well as allowing for the resolution to the contingency. All of these measure a person’s ability to make a triumphant decision. If some body(somebody) is capable, he can handle the work easily and succeed in the end.

         

              Second, making people’s own decision will help them to improve themselves. To get the decision successful(successfully), people should keep training themselves with the ability of analysis and judgment. For an instance, people may try to analyze the same issue in different situations, so that they can understand the distinct results in the diverse (diverse是adj.,应改为diversiticcation) and find the optimal decision. Obviously, people enhance themselves by the trainings and decision-making.

             

              Third, people can avoid being limited by other’s decisions. Sometimes the decisions, which others make, are likely to go beyond or restrain people’s ability, at this time, people will feel frustrated and are not able to exert their intelligence. It’s very troublesome in this situation.

          

              Taking into account of all these aspects, I consider that people prefer to make their own decisions.

 

 小结: 这篇文章写的好快哦!值得鼓励啊!!!作者的论点很清晰,也比较有深度,值得学习哦!虽然有一些语法错误,不过经过检查和不断的练习也是可以完全避免的.

          有以下建议给你:文章应该有一些例子支持论点

 小结: 这篇文章写的好快哦!值得鼓励啊!!!作者的论点很清晰,也比较有深度,值得学习哦!虽然有一些语法错误,不过经过检查和不断的练习也是可以完全避免的.

          有以下建议给你:文章应该有一些例子支持论点