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chasedreamtrue

148 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing games teaches us about life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some people hold the opinion that playing games teaches us about life. Others, however, contradict this opinion.Different people hold different opinions due to their dinstict backgrounds. Considering my experience and personality,I would like to say that I agree that playing games can teach us about life.There are many persuasive reasons why I choose this statement. And I will explore a few of important reasons and provide some evidence to support my viewpoint as follows.

First of all , the reason that can be presented to develop my position is that playing games make us more mature than before.As we know, the maturity of a person can make him calm when he faces challenging problems and achieve a satifying result . For example, we can be in trouble when we are playing a game .So we must resolve it if we tend to continue this game.Sometimes we may win ,or we will fail.It is the experience that make us mature.

In the second place, another convicing reason for me to choose this statement is that we can feel existence of affection and friendship.It is the affection that makes us have sensation of  the warm hospitality from the famlies.It is the friendship that have us feel that good friends are equally important to us besides famlies.Without friendship and affection, we would be icy to treat others .Hence, another equally important aspects is that both of them can bring us happiness.

In addition, what is also noticing that we can learn team spirit when we are playing games.For instance, when we are playing games with others ,we must stick together to win the wictory .Taking into account of this reason, we will easily find that team spirit makes us know we are not alone in society .At the same time we know that it is true that all for one ,one for all.

Admittedly,It may be true that playing games can not teach us about life in some conditions.For example ,sometimes some people think that purpose of playing games is to kill time and they can learn nothing.However, this alone does not lend strong support to weaken what I have supported.When the advatage and disadvatage of playing games teaching us about life and not teaching us about life are carefully examined ,the striking conclusion is obvious that playing games teaches us about life.

To sum up, due to the reasons mentioned above,it is more comfortable for me to gain something during playing games.Thus , I can safely and wisely to reach the conclusion that playing games can teach us about life .

同时问个问题,像这种类似的题目,第五段的反面观点有还有必要吗?谢谢!

farsuccess

148 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing games teaches us about life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some people hold the opinion that playing games teaches us about life. Others, however, contradict this opinion.Different people hold different opinions due to their dinstict backgrounds. Considering my experience and personality,I would like to say that I agree that playing games can teach us about life.There are many persuasive reasons why I choose this statement. And I will explore a few of important reasons and provide some evidence to support my viewpoint as follows.

First of all , the reason that can be presented to develop my position is that playing games make us more mature than before.As we know, the maturity of a person can make him calm when he faces challenging problems（challenges） and achieve a satifying (satisfying) result . For example, we can be in trouble when we are playing a game .So(Without question,) we must resolve it if we tend to continue this game.Sometimes we may win ,or we will fail.(Inevitably, we will face the failures). It is the experience that make us mature.

In the second place, another convicing(convincing) reason for me to choose this statement is that we can feel existence of affection and friendship.It is the affection that makes us have sensation of  the warm hospitality from the famlies.It is the friendship that have us feel that good friends are equally important to us besides famlies.Without friendship and affection, we would be icy to treat others .Hence, another equally important aspects is that both of them can bring us happiness.

In addition, what is also noticing that we can learn team spirit when we are playing games.For instance, when we are playing games with others ,we must stick together to win the wictory .Taking into account of this reason, we will easily find that team spirit makes us know we are not alone in society .At the same time we know that it is true that all for one ,one for all.

Admittedly,It may be true that playing games can not teach us about life in some conditions.For example ,sometimes some people think that purpose of playing games is to kill time and they can learn nothing.However, this alone does not lend strong support to weaken what I have supported.When the advantage(s) and disadvantage(s) of playing games teaching us about life and not teaching us about life are carefully examined ,the striking conclusion is obvious that playing games teaches us about life(the former is reasonable.我觉得不要在一句话中重复相同的东西为好)

To sum up, due to the reasons mentioned above,it is more comfortable for me to gain something (important) during playing games.Thus , I can safely and wisely to reach the conclusion that playing games can teach us about life .

你的问题，我的答案可以有也可以没有，不知道别人的意见。

chasedreamtrue

谢谢!每次修改后的我都存到文件夹了,这样便于在写下篇文章时避免再范类似的情况.