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发表于 2005-7-20 10:31:00 | 显示全部楼层

TWE159请哪位大虾帮忙给个分

When people talk about twentieth century, the deepest impression in people’s mind is that there are great many changes during this century. In my point of view, I consider that the most vital change is the appearance of t computers, because it makes our life comfortable, keeps us informed and help us touch with others easily.



In the first place on essential reason in support of my view is that thanks to inventing computers, a significant number of things can be readily done, by using computer, so efficient is using   computer that we can stay at home to finish all thing, such as shopping, paying the bill and so and so on.. Furthermore, it helps us save the precious time, which we spend on traveling before.



In the second place another chief reason is that with the science and technology developing, any latest news or researches are able to be found by computers. In this case, computers became the most common instrument to collect the information. For purpose of this, not only do so many students use them to finish the report, but also they play an important role in assisting them to find their satisfied jobs after they graduate.



Last but not least, the reason why I consider the appearance of the computers should be remembered is that through computers, we are able to easily commucate with the friends and our family  members, thought they are far away. Moreover, not only can we hear their voice, but also we are able to see them, which the traditional communications cannot do.



To sum up, benefits of the emergence of computers, which include making our life more comfortable, keeping ourselves informed and touching with others more easily , let me believe that the computers should be remembered as the twentieth century the greatest change.





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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2005-7-20 21:55:00 | 显示全部楼层

请给个分

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2005-7-22 06:40:00 | 显示全部楼层
那怎么加啊
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