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A good friend may have lots of characteristics, intelligent, a sense of humor, and reliable etc. However, in my dictionary, the definition of “good friend” is a person who is reliable that gives me a hand without one second consideration when I need him.

     In high school, I have 3 friends. One of them, Joe, is really intelligent. Sometime I indeed appreciate his intelligence, but in contrast I dislike his over-pride.Since doing really well in every course, he is always the top 1 student in our grade. Moreover Joe has abundant knowledge in many fields, thus almost few question came up by other students can bother him. Also, he pretends to be an adult
     though( through ?) talking and thinking as an adult’s perspective. Usually Joe leads me to think about lots of complicated, meaningful issues. When I said “I don’t know”, he wouldn’t leave such a nice chance to laugh at my ignorance.

    Well, another friend of mine is Mike, a maverick boy with a great sense of humor. His most sparking characteristic is an ability to tell jokes or do some funny faces making you roar with laughter. Actually, it’s always fabulous to hearing his special voice when I feel nothing to do. Nevertheless, Mike  enjoys not only bringing me happiness but also bringing to everyone else even a stranger. Consequently, it’s extremely hard to have a practical conversation with him because Mike only cares about his audiences. A moment if I were upset or not going to be one of them(比较难理解), he would walk away from you, and just go find another person willing listen his jokes immediately.

    The best friend is the one standing by me anytime while me being ( I was ) helpless. Jim plays such an important role in my life. Though he is not intelligent and humorous, but I think most necessary characteristic of human beings belongs to this normal guy----trustiness. No matter what a hardship I face, Jim is the bunch of light illuminate the way out. With no doubt, we trust each other; we help each other, furthermore, we have a deep understanding of each other. In conclusion, Jim demonstrates perfectly how a best friend should be.