TWE001 & 002, 前两天写的作文，求高手指点

sinmk2

很多地方表达地还不够native，论述上也不够严谨，希望大家拍砖~

1. People attend college or university for many different reasons (forexample, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge).Why do you think people attend college or university? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I believe most of us has the same experience studying at schools(同位语？). Initially, we attended the primary school, then junior school, and then high school. Some of us may continue to matriculate into a college or an university, choosing the major we are interested in. The reason why people decide to enrol in university, as far as I am concerned, may lie in the following several aspects: preparing for future career, increasing knowledge, having new experiences and making life-long friends, etc.



The first and the most important reason why people attend univeristy might be that people need to prepare for their future career. As is known to all, when attending university, we have to choose a specific major as the field we are going to focus on and have research in. This major should both be fascinating for us to involve and have much to do with our future job or the industry we are to devote ourselves to. As for myself, I chose English literature as my major. That’s because I love learning foreign languages and I wish my job be relevant to English.



Additionally, in university we may obsorb much knowledge in the specification we are fund of as much as we need, for the tutors are professional and concentrating on their fields and the resource in university is usually various. For instance, most of the professors is always doing research. Regardless the result, they are the experts in their category. We may not only go to them when meeting academic problems, but also request for an opportunity working for them in their research, from which we will benefit a lot, both academically and socially, because we could probablly reach the most exploring theory during the research and become the beholder of the birth of truth, and also working with people increases our ability to cooperate and to be a team player. Regarding the learning resource, we can find many reading materials related to our major in the university library. Enlarging our range of reading would simply be the best way to help us be academically competetive.



Last but not the least, attending university would be a good chance to make new, sometimes life-long friends, and experience the unexperienced, which might become your forever memory. As a matter of fact, many of us may feel that in university we should cherish friendship the most, because univerisity might be the last place where people arround you do not judge you from your background. After entering the society, people pay more attention on how to make friends that are helpful and in many cases useful in developing their career rather than building true friendship with the individuals of the same belief and goal. In university we may also have many unforgetable and life changing experience. May I take myself for an exemple. I love music. I felt extremely lucky on campus because I made a lot of friends of the same interests. 5 of us started a band and performed on different kinds of activities held in school. We even held a solo concert in the dining hall. I never dreamed about it.



To be concluded, university is a place where people recognize themselves, find their ways and chasing their dreams. Although some choose not to attend univerisity for different reasons, from what has been discussed above, most people, including me, will not regret having studied in university.

sinmk2

另外，四五百的字数是不是有点多啊？


2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


People must have teachers. Some of them could change your life and value tremendously. While some people hold the view that parents are the best teachers, and others say not. As for me, I strongly support the former statement.

Parents are the people who know us best and the first ones who dicover what we are interested in and talented most thus they can simply make a tailored education plan digging out all of our potential. Lang Lang, one of the most famous and skilled pianists in the world, won numerous awards and is now a master of piano at a very young age. I learned from a TV talkshow that his father was, to some extend, his first teacher. Lang’s father knew when the genious was at his early age that he is great talented in music. He then led Lang to one of the best piano professors of China for systematic training and became the “coach” of Lang. Actually, although with great gift, the wunderkind would hardly flower all his ability so early and quickly without his father’s full attention and concentration.

Parents are our first mentors. They gave our birth, brought us to this beautiful world. They have been watching us growing up and their behavior influenced us a lot in various aspects, either in good or bad ways. For exemple, if a couple are usually not respectable and keep doing bad to their parents, the children may not be affected positively and are very likely to disrespect the old people, even their parents. To the contrary, kids are easy to be brought to a right track if their parents are well educated, kind hearted and always ready to help others. In this case, children will nurtured in a healthy and harmonious atmosphere.

Parents are often our instructers in our career too. Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that in many families, career is inherited from generation to generation. I would like to take one of my best friends for instance, whose whole family are all doctors. He is among the third generation working in the hospital. What I was trying to say is that we should not ignore the great power of resource that was created by family members of the previous generations. We should also not deny that with the help of our family, we may meet more opportunities than our competetor in specific area and have access to success more easily.

To conclude, we may meet many teachers in our life, but parents must be your first and sometimes the best ones.

sinmk2

多谢兄弟（应该是GG吧。。）的建议，那不练TWE里的原题应该练哪的题呢？我比较笨，没找到其他的资源，麻烦推荐一下吧，谢谢！