[求助]作文求改~~谢谢各位大侠了0(><)0nz

alexwithibt

改了一下第2段. 这里最好你加上一个自几的例子.

First of all, students can learn new knowledge and more practical experience through studying in college. When in college the knowledge we get is deeper and further than that in high school, and we ourselves decide how to learn how to study and what to learn. That means we begin to explore our own way to get the knowledge as more as possible. Maybe someone will argue that we can also learn at home by ourselves, I will oppose this argument. While in college, what we learn is not just the knowledge in the books but also the knowledge from the entire round, the teachers, professors even our classmates and so on. Furthermore, when you come up with difficulties of your subjects, you can get help from your teachers. Because colleges always have labs, then you can practice what you learn and improve the effects.

 

(First of all, to succeed in future labor markets is the primary reason that students attend college. As competitions in current society becoming more radical, those who are not equipped with high qualified training skills can neither hunt a decent job nor succeed to tackle complex matters in jobs and lives, thus will not attain their accomplishments. Undoubtedly, participating college, students may follow professors to obtain all sorts of knowledge and skills professionally and practically. The knowledge and practice absorbed in college, will guarantee students’ lifelong success……加一个你的example. )