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悬月清辉 发表于 2014-3-18 22:19
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悬月清辉

3-22 独立写作
A\D People should state their honest opinions even though they know others will disagree with their views.

With the idea of progressing the ability of expression seeping into the mind of every modern dweller, the relevant skills concerning how to express our idea better burgeon amazingly. However, some voice in current wisdom claim that people should state their honest opinions even though someone will take the negative attitudes. An analysis of this argument would reveal how reasonable it is. As far as my propensity is concerned, I consent to this proposition to this best advantage.

Primarily, only shell we claim our personal opinions, we are able to gather the different ideas from the others weather they agree or not, which can optimize our thinking. Besides, evidence from quantitative research could be cited for further demonstration: up to 70% of interviewees of randomly chosen people in different age claim that they prefer straightforward speaking the ideas to others because they attempt to know the real view from others. That is to say, a healthy and beneficial discussion which have the benefit of establishing the great friendship base on the clear and strong-minded opinions from each other.

On the contrary, it is hard for us to have the sincere friends or the treasure friends relationships if we always just follow peoples minds rather than establish ourselves. For the one aspect, our friends will get the mind that we do not care about or suspect them as just saying something the same to go through the motions when we do not say our opinions honestly so that they may get away from us. For another aspect, if we lose the friends one by one, we can not subsist in the social. On the contemporary society,the world's, as well as the modern social's, connection is getting more and more closeness and complexness, which require our ability of growing the bigger friend circle. So, for the concerns, is there ample evidence to justify that the importance of be honest when we have the views weather there is no one positive?

Finally, maintaining the personal ideas also is good at the development of the companies and the social.Although we may not have conclusive scientific evidence of a cause-effect relationship between the two, ample anecdotal evidence establishes a significant correlation. Imagine what would happen to a company which employee have no idea of optimize their company and just rely on several persons. Under such circumstance which the people who in charge of the building of social also ignore their real thinking because of the worrying towards the different voices, our social will stop progressing.

Above all, it is the varies views and aspects from each of the seven hundreds million peoples above the world make the earth better, more interesting and more colorful. All the evidence justifies an unshakable conclusion that every person shell pronounce their own opinions loudly and confidently.

悬月清辉

3-23 独立写作

A\D Parents must have strict rules to their children if they want their children to be successful.

With the idea of paying more attention to kids' education seeping into the mind of every modern parent, the relevant conversations and condition concerning the education issue of parents burgeon amazingly. Not surprisingly, it is proposed by many experts that the parents must have strict rules to their children if they want their children to be successful. An analysis of this argument would reveal how fallacious it is. As far as my propensity is concerned, I can hardly approve of this assertion.

Indeed, we have to meticulously admit that parents do need have the strict attitudes between their children on some aspect to some extent, which aware the kids what should do and what should not. Imaging what would happen to a person whose father or mother ignore the mistakes he or she have done such as being dishonest, boorish to others or cheat. Hence, they would be the failing parents if they were lose the rigorousness when the kids make some mistakes, which would not let children realize the problems and even think the methods they do something is great.

Yet, none of these are sufficient evidence to conclude that the mission of prosperity by extremely striction is definitely right. As the time goes on, different people from different era have the different thoughts. Might as well say the rules made by parents more belief purely magnifies the views of which person the parents attempt to be, based on the fallacious idea that successful children must be the person their parents prefer, which often hide the real interests of children. So, this argument leaves us the question-what is the most important element of the succeeding? From an overall perspective, the answer is by all means hobbies. Without the hobbies of physics, Albert Einstein would not have proposed the theory of relativity; without the obsession of art, Claude Monet would not have led to the name of Impressionist painting; without the interest of technology design, Steve Jobs would not have made Apple unparalleled in the world. Under such circumstances, is it correct that the parents do not mind the personal preference and just limit their children around the stuff rules?

Worse still, most of the person who always obey their parents' ideas usually lake the ability of independent thinking which is more and more vital to be successful on the contemporary society. It has been repeatedly mentioned in newspapers, academic articles that up to 70% of interviewees of the dependent person whose family has detailed list of everything claim that they would like to follow others' thinking instead of making themselves be the central of talking, which might site them into the negative condition.

Weighing in mind the potential aftermath of having stuff rules in family, all the evidence justifies an unshakable conclusion that only can the children have the loose and active family environment, they would have the chance of success.


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纯净水1993

3.22独立写作改

悬月清辉

纯净水1993 发表于 2014-3-23 20:25
3.23独立写作改

谢谢 学习了！

纯净水1993

互相学习呗~

悬月清辉

纯净水1993 发表于 2014-3-23 22:06
互相学习呗~

对了亲 你帮我改的是22号的哦，23是今天刚写的

纯净水1993

哦哦 不好意思....

悬月清辉

纯净水1993 发表于 2014-3-23 23:04
哦哦 不好意思....

没事就是突然看见了，我看的时候也没注意

JanetYellen

悬月清辉 发表于 2014-3-23 19:00
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