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danie 其实多分析几遍别人的文章，再形成自己的风格，我现在就特纠结怎么写。  多谢danie的仔细修改。

DanielleZ

6.18
Do you agreeor disagree with the following statement? It is better to relax by a movie orreading a book than doing physical exercise.

When it comesto the question of different ways for people to relax, people often hold differentopinions. Some people prefer staying at home watching a movie or reading abook, but some other people would like to go out of their houses to do somephysical exercises. And people who prefer staying at home consider that a movieor reading a book would give people better relax than doing physical exercise.However, I do not agree with these people’ ideas.  

Admittedly, watchingmovie or reading a book with a cup of coffee would be very fantastic for mostof people to calm down and relax. After a whole day’s hard working or studying,people can refresh their mind and escape from matters which they worry about forseveral hours via a movie or a book. My parents and many of my friends wouldlike to read a book before they go to sleep, since reading could help themrelax and have a great rest, then prepare them for new study or work moreefficiently. A movie and reading a book could help people relax from lettingthem calm their mind.

However, Mostof people will choose to watch movies or reading books at home, which meansthat most of time they will be along at home and will reduce interaction withpeople around themselves. Eventually, without getting together with theirfriends, they will be isolated and their personality will be negatively influenced,perhaps they will be more upset about their failures or mistakes on work orstudy, be more sensitive about unfair treatments from outside, or even becomevery shine to talk with strangers. Sometimes, staying along at home for a longtime can be more damage to people, rather than help them relax.

Thirdly, Physicalexercise can help people relax both physically and mentally. Most peopleworking in one position, such as sitting, or standing. Physical exercise couldhelp them move stiff body after one day’s hard working. Moreover, some lessonsabout physical exercise are now available in many gyms, such as dancing classand yoga class; people can join these classes to do some physical exercise torelax. Group activities can make people’s life better. They can make more newfriends who have equal interest in physical exercise, and they can talk withthem and exchange opinions about physical exercise. They can relax from talkingwith new friends.

To sum up,physical exercise will do better to help people to relax than a movie orreading a book, because it can help people enlarge their social network and gettheir body moved.

Aaaaaaangela

When it
comesto the question of different ways for people to relax, people often hold differentopinions. Some people prefer staying at home to watching a movie(movies) or reading abook(books)感觉题目中是指you他说是单数，但是对于people来说，感觉直接用复数,but（and）感觉不需要用but来转折 some other people would like to go out of their houses to do somephysical exercises. And people who prefer staying at home （to） considering that a movieor reading a book wouldgive people better relax than doing physical exercise(感觉这句和前面两句有重复，我自己觉得好像没什么必要性).However, I do not agree with these people’ ideas.  

Admittedly, watching movies or reading (a) books with a cup ofcoffee would be very fantastic for most (of去掉) people to calm down and relax. Aftera whole day’s hard working or studying, people can refresh their mind andescape from matters which they worry about for several hours via a movie or abook(前面是they后面是单数，搭配起来怪怪的）. My parents and many of my friends would like to read a book before theygo to sleep, since reading could help them relax and have a great rest, thenprepare them for new study or work more efficiently.（help them to study or work more efficiently） A movie and reading a bookcould help people relax from letting them calm their mind.

However, Most of people will choose to watch movies orreading books at home, which means that most of time they will be along at homeand will reduce interaction with people around themselves. Eventually, withoutgetting together with their friends, they will be isolated and theirpersonality will be negatively influenced, perhaps they will be more upsetabout their failures or mistakes on work or study, be more sensitive aboutunfair treatments from outside, or even become very shine to talk with strangers.Sometimes, staying along at home for a longtime can be more damage to people,rather than help them relax.

Thirdly, Physical exercise can help people relax bothphysically and mentally. Most people working in one position(这个和后面那个意思不是很统一啊), such as sitting,or standing. Physical exercise could help them move stiff body after one day’shard working. Moreover, some lessons about physical exercise are now availablein many gyms, such as dancing class and yoga class; people can join theseclasses to do some physical exercise torelax. Group activities can makepeople’s life better. They can make more new friends who have equal interest inphysical exercise, and they can talk with them and exchange opinions aboutphysical exercise. They can relax from talking with new friends.

To sum up, physical exercise will do better to help people torelax than a movie or reading a book, because it can help people enlarge theirsocial network and get their body moved.我觉得亲你的作文，观点论述的不是很明确啊，第二段你说了，reading books 和 movies的好处，第三段又说了physical exercise的好处，但是没有致命前者的不好，个人的感觉最好说一下，不然，感觉会观点模糊。开头段还可以再充实一点~加油啊~~

DanielleZ

When it
comesto the question of different ways for people to relax, people often hold differentopinions. Some people prefer staying at home to watching a movie(movies) or reading abook(books)感觉题目中是指you他说是单数，但是对于people来说，感觉直接用复数,but（and）感觉不需要用but来转折 some other people would like to go out of their houses to do somephysical exercises. And people who prefer staying at home （to） considering that a movieor reading a book wouldgive people better relax than doing physical exercise(感觉这句和前面两句有重复，我自己觉得好像没什么必要性).However, I do not agree with these people’ ideas.  

Admittedly, watching movies or reading (a) books with a cup ofcoffee would be very fantastic for most (of去掉) people to calm down and relax. Aftera whole day’s hard working or studying, people can refresh their mind andescape from matters which they worry about for several hours via a movie or abook(前面是they后面是单数，搭配起来怪怪的）. My parents and many of my friends would like to read a book before theygo to sleep, since reading could help them relax and have a great rest, thenprepare them for new study or work more efficiently.（help them to study or work more efficiently） A movie and reading a bookcould help people relax from letting them calm their mind.

However, Most of people will choose to watch movies orreading books at home, which means that most of time they will be along at homeand will reduce interaction with people around themselves. Eventually, withoutgetting together with their friends, they will be isolated and theirpersonality will be negatively influenced, perhaps they will be more upsetabout their failures or mistakes on work or study, be more sensitive aboutunfair treatments from outside, or even become very shine to talk with strangers.Sometimes, staying along at home for a longtime can be more damage to people,rather than help them relax.

Thirdly, Physical exercise can help people relax bothphysically and mentally. Most people working in one position(这个和后面那个意思不是很统一啊), such as sitting,or standing. Physical exercise could help them move stiff body after one day’shard working. Moreover, some lessons about physical exercise are now availablein many gyms, such as dancing class and yoga class; people can join theseclasses to do some physical exercise torelax. Group activities can makepeople’s life better. They can make more new friends who have equal interest inphysical exercise, and they can talk with them and exchange opinions aboutphysical exercise. They can relax from talking with new friends.

To sum up, physical exercise will do better to help people torelax than a movie or reading a book, because it can help people enlarge theirsocial network and get their body moved.我觉得亲你的作文，观点论述的不是很明确啊，第二段你说了，reading books 和 movies的好处，第三段又说了physical exercise的好处，但是没有致命前者的不好，个人的感觉最好说一下，不然，感觉会观点模糊。开头段还可以再充实一点~加油啊~~

-- by 会员 Aaaaaaangela (2012/6/19 8:29:48)

是滴~再看下我的这篇文章，我也觉得有这样的问题。这种让步讨论的问题，以后写时要注意一下啊，谢谢啦~

DanielleZ

6.20
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Patience isusually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.（感觉这篇好难写啊~~）

There is no denying that the world is developing in very high speed. Nowadayspeople become busier than people who lived 100 years ago. The reasons why ourlife become so fast is that the technology help people move faster, get moreinformation, and even prepare food easier. So that, some people think thatpatience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action immediate inthis rushing world, because waiting patiently is a waste of time. But from my viewpoint, fast as our life is, we still need patience to contemplate before weaction, since from careful planning and preparation, we can fulfill our goalmore easily.  

Initially, a considerable plan can shorten time for people to strive onthe way to reach the target. It is universally known that considerable plansgenerally come from patient contemplate. Take solving problem on mathematic asan example, before we start to calculate the results, a patient comprehensionof the question is of much importance. If we rush to calculate before wetotally understand the question, we will have an incorrect result in most oftime. It needs patience when we solve problem related to everyday life andworking as well.  

Moreover, during the process of things evolving, patience is also necessary.Because it takes time that actions could work. If we are too anxious to takeseveral actions at the same time, results sometimes could be even worse. Whenwe got bad cold, most pills will assist us feel better later after takingpills. But some people would like to increase the speed of full recovery; theywill take pills once and once again. As the result, too many pills will causeother illnesses rather than curing the cold. Waiting patiently to see theresult of the previous action is really essential for most of us when deal withall kinds of problem.

Admittedly, no account can we ignore the importance of taking action. Ifsomeone only waits patiently without action, no possible can s/he be success.
Taking action is the only way can we realize considerable plan. Forinstance, someone, who wants to go abroad study, have all study plans beenpatient developed without take first step to study, can not go abroadeventually.

To sum up, immediate action is undoubted important, but patient is morevital because only patient planning and waiting can lead us correct directionto the goal.  

DanielleZ

6.21 写得我纠结啊~看看其他人的文章啊~hiahia~
One of your classmates needs help with some schoolwork. Which solutionwould you recommend your classmate should do: to ask you for help or to find aprofessional tutor for help?

Have you ever face some problems about schoolwork? When facing a problem,where do you prefer to get help, from your classmate, or a profession tutor? Differentpeople hold different opinion about these questions. Some people prefer gethelp from classmates, because from discussion both of them will benefit. In myopinion, if one of my classmates need help with some schoolwork, I would liketo suggest my classmates find a professional tutor to help with some schoolwork.

At the very begin, guidance from professional tutors would help myclassmate solve the problem more efficiently. As an expert in a certain field,a tutor has already encountered millions of issues in this field. So that, whenfacing the same problem, a student may spend one hour to figuring out theanswer, however, the tutor will probably get the answer at the first glance atthis question. By getting help from a professional tutor, my classmates cansave numerous of time to revolve problems.

More importantly, finding a professional tutor can help my classmatescorrect some inappropriate learning methods which will obstruct improving theirperformance even they work very hard. Take my cousin as an example. Hisperformance used to be not so good comparing with other students in his class, evenhe is a very clever and hard working student. His mother hired a very famoustutor for him, and this tutor will accompany my cousin finish his homework, teachsome useful tips and proper methods to solve problems everyday. Thanks to theproper learning method from this tutor, my cousin’s grades have alreadyimproved a lot. So that from my cousin’s experience, I believe that aprofession tutor will also benefit to my classmates.  

Admittedly, offering assistance to my classmates would definitelybenefit my classmates and me as well. By discussing problems with my classmates,I can review and grasp the relevant knowledge better, which could also improvemy grades. Moreover, it can help us develop interpersonal and communicationskills from discussion, which are quite important to my future.

To sum up, I would like recommend my classmates get help fromprofessional tutors, because it can help my classmates study more efficientlyand correct some learning method.


To sum up, I would like recommend my classmates get help fromprofessional tutors, because it can help my classmates study more efficientlyand correct some learning method.

zombiee

6.20
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Patience isusually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.（感觉这篇好难写啊~~）

There is no denying that the world is developing in very high speed. Nowadayspeople become busier than people who lived 100 years ago. The reasons why ourlife become so fast is that the technology help people move faster, get moreinformation, and even prepare food easier. So that, some people think thatpatience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action immediate inthis rushing world, because waiting patiently is a waste of time. But from my viewpoint, fast as our life is, we still need patience to contemplate before weaction, since from careful planning and preparation, we can fulfill our goalmore easily.  

Initially, a considerable plan can shorten time for people to strive onthe way to reach the target. It is universally known that considerable plansgenerally come from patient contemplate. Take solving problem on mathematic asan example, before we start to calculate the results, a patient comprehensionof the question is of much importance. If we rush to calculate before wetotally understand the question, we will have an incorrect result in most oftime. It needs patience when we solve problem related to everyday life andworking as well.  

Moreover, during the process of things evolving, patience is also necessary.Because it takes time that actions could work. If we are too anxious to takeseveral actions at the same time, results sometimes could be even worse. Whenwe got bad cold, most pills will assist us feel better later after takingpills有点反复说，重复. But some people would like to increase the speed of full recovery; theywill take pills once and once again. As the result, too many pills will causeother illnesses rather than curing the cold. Waiting patiently to see theresult of the previous action is really essential for most of us when deal withall kinds of problem.

Admittedly, no account can we ignore the importance of taking action. Ifsomeone only waits patiently without action, no possible never can s/he be success.
Taking action is the only way can we realize considerable plan. Forinstance, someone, who wants to go abroad study, have all study plans beenpatient developed without take first step to study, +and can not go abroadeventually.

To sum up, immediate action is undoubtedly important, but patient名词 is morevital because only patient planning and waiting can lead us in the correct direction toward the goal.  

-- by 会员 DanielleZ (2012/6/20 18:06:46)

有进步，结构条理清楚，错误较少，正反两面分析，不足是缺深入，详述。
进步很大，加油~~

DanielleZ

6.20
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Patience isusually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.（感觉这篇好难写啊~~）

There is no denying that the world is developing in very high speed. Nowadayspeople become busier than people who lived 100 years ago. The reasons why ourlife become so fast is that the technology help people move faster, get moreinformation, and even prepare food easier. So that, some people think thatpatience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action immediate inthis rushing world, because waiting patiently is a waste of time. But from my viewpoint, fast as our life is, we still need patience to contemplate before weaction, since from careful planning and preparation, we can fulfill our goalmore easily.  

Initially, a considerable plan can shorten time for people to strive onthe way to reach the target. It is universally known that considerable plansgenerally come from patient contemplate. Take solving problem on mathematic asan example, before we start to calculate the results, a patient comprehensionof the question is of much importance. If we rush to calculate before wetotally understand the question, we will have an incorrect result in most oftime. It needs patience when we solve problem related to everyday life andworking as well.  

Moreover, during the process of things evolving, patience is also necessary.Because it takes time that actions could work. If we are too anxious to takeseveral actions at the same time, results sometimes could be even worse. Whenwe got bad cold, most pills will assist us feel better later after takingpills有点反复说，重复. But some people would like to increase the speed of full recovery; theywill take pills once and once again. As the result, too many pills will causeother illnesses rather than curing the cold. Waiting patiently to see theresult of the previous action is really essential for most of us when deal withall kinds of problem.

Admittedly, no account can we ignore the importance of taking action. Ifsomeone only waits patiently without action, no possible never can s/he be success.
Taking action is the only way can we realize considerable plan. Forinstance, someone, who wants to go abroad study, have all study plans beenpatient developed without take first step to study, +and can not go abroadeventually.

To sum up, immediate action is undoubtedly important, but patient名词 is morevital because only patient planning and waiting can lead us in the correct direction toward the goal.  

-- by 会员 DanielleZ (2012/6/20 18:06:46)

有进步，结构条理清楚，错误较少，正反两面分析，不足是缺深入，详述。
进步很大，加油~~

-- by 会员 zombiee (2012/6/21 23:05:13)

谢谢僵尸先生鼓励呢，我会继续努力，向你们学习的~话说你的作文写了木有啊？

包子不包子

Have you ever faced some problems about schoolwork? When facing a problem,where do you prefer to get help, from your classmate, or a profession tutor? Differentpeople hold different opinion about these questions. Some people prefer gethelp from classmates, because from discussion both of them will benefit. In myopinion, if one of my classmates need help with some schoolwork, I would liketo suggest my classmates find a professional tutor to help with some schoolwork.

At the very begin, guidance from professional tutors would help myclassmate solve the problem more efficiently. As an expert in a certain field,a tutor has already encountered millions of issues in this field. So that, whenfacing the same problem, a student may spend one hour to figuring out theanswer, however, the tutor will probably get the answer at the first glance atthis question. By getting help from a professional tutor, my classmates cansave numerous of time to revolve problems.

More importantly, finding a professional tutor can help my classmatescorrect some inappropriate learning methods which will obstruct improving theirperformance even they work very hard. Take my cousin as an example. Hisperformance used to be not so good comparing with other students in his class, evenhe is a very clever and hard working student. His mother hired a very famoustutor for him, and this tutor will accompany my cousin finish his homework, teachsome useful tips and proper methods to solve problems everyday. Thanks to theproper learning method from this tutor, my cousin’s grades have alreadyimproved a lot. So that from my cousin’s experience, I believe that aprofession tutor will also benefit to my classmates.

Admittedly, offering assistance to my classmates would definitelybenefit my classmates and me as well. By discussing problems with my classmates,I can review and grasp the relevant knowledge better, which could also improvemy grades. Moreover, it can help us develop interpersonal and communicationskills from discussion, which are quite important to my future. 感觉还少一部分 但是...所以问tutor更好

To sum up, I would like recommend my classmates get help fromprofessional tutors, because it can help my classmates study more efficientlyand correct some learning method.


很好了啊 包子没的说了 逻辑很清晰的

DanielleZ

6.22
If you need to discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others,you will use e-mail or text messaging, or use the telephone or voice-messaging.
It isuniversally acknowledge that upsetting or controversial problems can not be avoidedin our life. When you need to discuss these problems with your friend,classmates, or colleagues, by which way do you prefer, e-mails and text messageor the telephone or voice-messaging? Most people probably will choose telephonesor voice-messaging, since people in the other side of telephone could understandwhat you saying instantly, especially telephones could enable both of youexchange opinions more efficiently. However, from my standpoint, I do notconsider telephone and voice-messaging can be better than e-mail and textmessaging when discussing upsetting or controversial problems.
At thevery beginning, one disadvantage of discussing through telephone orvoice-messaging is that people sometimes can not understand each other verywell through phones, thus discussion through the telephone or voice-messagingwill leave much to be desired. For instance, if a Chinese, whose English isvery poor, discusses with an American through telephone, the results will turnto be very frustrated. There is no doubt that they can not understand eachother, and not mention to discuss some upsetting or controversial problems.However, by using e-mails and text messages the situation can be better, theycan use some tools, such as dictionary, reference books, and internet websites,to help them translate the content of e-mails. By doing so, discussion can besmoothly and efficiently.
Inaddition, e-mails and text messages will enable people to have discussionrecorded and help them recall all details whenever they need, especially forsome essential discussions of controversial problems. Take my boss an example;she has been working for more than ten years. She told me that getting into thehabit of discussing through e-mails is very crucial for our career life, sincepeople sometimes are too busy to remember every detail about discussion of controversialproblems. It is conceivable that e-mails and text messages can help peoplerecall those details. So, e-mails and text messages are needed for discussion ofcontroversial problems.
Admittedly,there is no denying that using telephones and voice-messages can reflect sender’semotion more clearly and vividly. From their intonation, people can gain moreinformation than reading an e-mail. But, most of time the above information isuseless for people to discuss upsetting or controversial problems.

To sumup, I prefer using e-mails and text messages than using telephones and voice messages;because it can help people understand each other better and have discussionrecorded.