拖延症老人终于下决心开写了，求砖拍，求鄙视

DanielleZ

Hi 僵尸先森~
waiting for your assignment 哦~

zombiee

6.20



In modern society, people live a high-speed life: we get up in a hurry to work, grab fast food at Mcdonald, do our work quickly and efficiently, and so forth. It seems that we all immerse ourselves in bunches of daily trifles, and even do not have any time to take a breath. Almost everyone believes that we should take action now rather than later, patience is usually not a good strategy. However, as in my perspective, it is more important to be patient than hasty.

First and the foremost, as the old Chinese saying put it: haste makes waste. The proverb means acting too quickly may actually slow things down. For instance, the Great Leap Forward event in China in 1960s, which meant to use stereotyped machines, untrained workers and undeveloped technology to catch up even exceed the developed countries in less than 5 years, has actually done damage to the Chinese industry and agriculture. When we try to do something quickly("haste") we are more likely to make mistakes and end up spending more time, money, etc, doing it("waste"). The passage of time is irreversible, so plan before you act.

Moreover, as the Chinese say goes, look before you leap. In our daily life, we need listen to others’ advice, opinions, and criticism before we make our decision. Actually, in a project or a program for our customers, companies usually first listen to the customers demand, then convoke co-workers to arrange the assignment to make a plan, even revise the plan several times according to some factors affect the project, and finally take actions to deal with it. During this whole process, we have to be patient with customers, co-workers, leaders, and others involved in the project. If not, the whole plan may not work and the project could fail eventually.

Finally, however, overdue patience is harmful to us. For example, when we have emergencies, we definitely should solve the problem without hesitation. When we see a child chase a ball in face of a high speed car, or an old man fall down the stairs, we should protect them and stretch out hands to help them immediately. Under certain circumstance, there is no need to be patient and make a plan before we act.

All in all, patience is more critical and even vital than haste. We should take our time to think and plan before we act. Time is so valuable and so limit to us all that we have to use it more reasonable and effective.

zombiee

Hi 僵尸先森~
waiting for your assignment 哦~

-- by 会员 DanielleZ (2012/6/21 19:45:34)

不好意思，来啦~

zombiee

6.21


In our daily school lives, we take courses with our classmates, and obtain knowledge from our professional tutors. They both play a important role to help us, especially when we come up with a difficult question. But who should we turn to? Our intimate friends-classmates-with whom we take courses, have dinner together, and play games. Or the respected mentor-our professional tutor- from whom we obtain our knowledge, learn lessons, and require necessary skills with schoolwork. From my perspective, the person we should turn to depend on the type of our problems that we can’t deal with independently.

On the one hand, if our problem is tend to be a personal or a simple one, asking classmates for help is a better idea. Personally speaking, if my classmate has a problem with following the notes about the course or ask for the best way of learning and speaking in front of others, I can give some useful advice according to my same experience and knowledge. Moreover, my suggestions and opinions are targeted at s/he’s problem, especially if I know the classmate deeply and closely. That is to say, I, rather than a professional tutor, am a best choice for my classmate on these problems.

On the other hand, if the problem with schoolwork is out of my ability, or if the question is more professional for me to answer, I will suggest my classmate to turn to the professional tutor for help. For example, when my classmate confront a big challenge with his special subject of scientific research, which definitely out of my scope of knowledge, he should go to the tutor’s office even though he has to make appointment first, or he has to wait according to the tutor’s schedule. Suppose that I answered the question conceitedly, my classmate may get on the wrong track to solve the problem and fail eventually. For sake of my classmate, I will not give a bad advice and ruin his schoolwork.

All in all, if one of your classmates needs help with some schoolwork, the solution I would recommend my classmate should do is depended on the type of his problem. Whether to ask me for help or to find a professional tutor for help, I will do my best to help my classmates.

kchszy061ban

蓝色为意见或建议高亮为精彩绿色为总结红色为错误

In our daily school lives, we take courses with our classmates, and obtain knowledge from our professional tutors. They both play a important role to help us, especially when we come up with a difficult question. But who should we turn to? Our intimate friends-classmates-with whom we take courses, have dinner together, and play games. Or the respected mentor-our professional tutor- from whom we obtain our knowledge, learn lessons, and require necessary skills with schoolwork. From my perspective, the person we should turn to depend on the type of our problems that we can’t deal with independently.

On the one hand, if our problem is tends to be a personal or a simple one, asking classmates for help is a better idea. Personally speaking, if my classmate has a problem with following the notes about the course or ask for the best way of learning and speaking in front of others, I can give him/her some useful advice according to my same experience and knowledge. Moreover, my suggestions and opinions are targeted at s/he’s problem, especially if I know the classmate deeply and closely. That is to say, I, rather than a professional tutor, am a best choice for my classmate on these problems.

On the other hand, if the problem with schoolwork is out of my ability, or if the question is more(too) professional for me to answer, I will suggest my classmate to turn to the professional tutor for help. For example, when my classmate confront a big challenge with his special subject of scientific research, which definitely out of my scope of knowledge, he should go to the tutor’s office even though he has to make appointment first, or he has to wait according to the tutor’s schedule. Suppose that I answered the question conceitedly, my classmate may get on the wrong track to solve the problem and fail eventually. For sake of my classmate, I will not give a bad advice and ruin his schoolwork.

All in all, if one of your classmates needs help with some schoolwork, the solution I would recommend my classmate should do is depended on the type of his problem. Whether to ask me for help or to find a professional tutor for help, I will do my best to help my classmates.(其实这句话与主题关系不大额)

文章整体不错，不过，这篇文章两面都包含，结果就是两方面都木有很好的展开和支持。

DanielleZ

Hi 僵尸先森~
waiting for your assignment 哦~

-- by 会员 DanielleZ (2012/6/21 19:45:34)

不好意思，来啦~

-- by 会员 zombiee (2012/6/22 0:14:39)

嘿嘿~改完啦~其实都没有修改什么，学习了很多好句子啊。全都记在小本上啦~
In modernsociety, people live a high-speed life: we get up in a hurry to work, grab fast food at McDonald,do our work quickly and efficiently, and so forth. Itseems that we all immerse ourselves in bunches of daily trifles, andeven do not have any time to take a breath. Almost everyone believes that weshould take action now rather than later, patience is usually not a goodstrategy. However, as in my perspective, it is more important to be patientthan hasty.

First and the foremost, as the old Chinese sayingput it: haste makes waste. The proverb means acting too quickly may actuallyslow things down. For instance, the Great Leap Forward event in China in 1960s,which meant to use stereotyped machines, untrained workers and undevelopedtechnology to catch upeven exceed the developed countries in less than 5 years, has actuallydone damage to the Chinese industry and agriculture. When we try to dosomething quickly("haste") we are more likely to make mistakes andend up spending more time, money, etc, doing it("waste"). The passageof time is irreversible, so plan before you act.


Moreover, as the Chinese say goes, look before youleap. In our daily life, we need listen to others’ advice, opinions, andcriticism before we make our decision. Actually, in a project or a program forour customers, companies usually first listen to the customers demand, then convoke co-workers toarrange the assignment to make a plan, even revise the plan several timesaccording to some factors affect the project, and finally take actions to dealwith it. During this whole process, we have to be patient with customers, co-workers,leaders, and others involved in the project. If not, the whole plan may notwork and the project could fail eventually.

Finally, however, overdue patience is harmful tous. For example, when we have emergencies, we definitely should solve theproblem without hesitation. When we see a child chase a ball in face of a highspeed car, or an old man fall down the stairs, we should protect them andstretch out hands to help them immediately. Under certain circumstance, thereis no need to be patient and make a plan before we act.

All in all, patience is more critical and evenvital than haste. We should take our time to think and plan before we act. Timeis so valuable and so limit
ed to us all that we have to use it morereasonable and effective.

zombiee

6.22


Have you ever been upset and depressed when discuss problems with others but have no results? Have you ever put all your strength to argue for your standpoint but not been understood by others? Have you ever so confused that when exchange opinions with others about controversial problems but fell into a quarrel? If you have ever had such experiences, you would know how wonderful it is to use e-mail or text messaging to solve these problems.

Email or text messaging is effective and efficient in exchanging ideas especially when we discuss upsetting or controversial problems. Take my thesis for example, when I first came up with the topic, I felt confused and self-contradictory so I discussed the topic with my classmates and friends. To my surprise, everyone had his/her own points on the specific topic and views from his/her own respect. I went for help but, to my disappointment, the result was horrible. When things got worse, I turned to my tutor for help and got a piece of advice: why not tell your classmates to type their brilliant ideas down and communicate them with e-mail or text messaging. I did what my mentor told me, and harvested a great deal with the thesis and more importantly of the exchange method. To illustrate, when we type every word we want to argue with others, we can not help ourselves to make an effort to say it clearly, logically, and even rhetoric. So we reconstruct the main point with logical thinking and precise words, and rebuild it with care. Meanwhile, the unwarranted ideas, points out of scope, and even personal attack are all eliminated by ourselves. What an amazing finding! See? How fantastic it is as express yourself via email or text messaging.

This case is not rare, in reality, frequently we deal with written information more effectively. There are several advantages in using email or text messaging, and it is recordable, precise, easy to be referred etc. When we use email or text messaging to express our ideas and exchange opinions about controversial problems with others, we can get the main point of others from written materials effectively just according to its clear and reasonable structure. Moreover, we can find the pitfalls or drawbacks in their email or messaging easily and precisely. Finally, we could revise the incorrect points and improve our ideas just from the correction by others. This is effective and efficient way to improve and revise our standpoint, let alone learning the good points from the written material we have read.

Email or text messaging may have some merits, but it suffers from the disadvantage that it is more time-consuming than the telephone or voice-messaging. Telephone or voice-messaging is definitely a immediately reflective system. We can flip our thoughts freely on the tip of our tongue, exchange our ideas immediately and conveniently. But when it comes to the special situation that we need to discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others, the disadvantages of telephone or voice-messaging, such as vague to understand, easily to induce quarrel and tend to forgetful if not written down, outweigh its advantages in most of cases.

All in all, Email or text messaging is effective and efficient in exchanging ideas especially when we discuss upsetting or controversial problems.

包子不包子

6.22


Have you ever been upset and depressed when discuss problems with others but have no results? Have you ever put all your strength to argue for your standpoint but not been understood by others? Have you ever so confused that when exchange opinions with others about controversial problems but things fell into a quarrel? If you have ever had such experiences, you would know how wonderful it is to use e-mail or text messaging to solve these problems.

Email or text messaging is effective and efficient in exchanging ideas especially when we discuss upsetting or controversial problems. Take my thesis for example, when I first came up with the topic, I felt confused and self-contradictory so I discussed the topic with my classmates and friends. To my surprise, everyone had his/her own points on the specific topic and views from his/her own respect. I went for help but, to my disappointment, the result was horrible. When things got worse, I turned to my tutor for help and got a piece of advice: why not tell your classmates to type their brilliant ideas down and communicate them with e-mail or text messaging. I did what my mentor told me, and harvested a great deal with the thesis and more importantly of the exchange method. To illustrate, when we type every word we want to argue with others, we can not help ourselves to make an effort to say it clearly, logically, and even rhetoric. So we reconstruct the main point with logical thinking and precise words, and rebuild it with care. Meanwhile, the unwarranted ideas, points out of scope, and even personal attack are all eliminated by ourselves. What an amazing finding! See? 不大适合正式书面语吧How fantastic it is as express yourself via email or text messaging.感觉这段叙述有些琐碎了

This case is not rare, in reality, frequently we deal with written information more effectively.不用再说written information了吧直接说e-mail好处就好 There are several advantages in using email or text messaging, and it is recordable, precise, easy to be referred etc. When we use email or text messaging to express our ideas and exchange opinions about controversial problems with others, we can get the main point of others from written materials effectively just according to its clear and reasonable structure. Moreover, we can find the pitfalls or drawbacks in their email or messaging easily and precisely. Finally, we could revise the incorrect points and improve our ideas just from the correction by others. This is effective and efficient way to improve and revise our standpoint, let alone learning the good points from the written material we have read.逻辑很好啊 但是句子有些简单了

Email or text messaging may have some merits, but it suffers from the disadvantage that it is more time-consuming than the telephone or voice-messaging. Telephone or voice-messaging is definitely a immediately reflective system. We can flip our thoughts freely on the tip of our tongue, exchange our ideas immediately and conveniently. But when it comes to the special situation that we need to discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others, the disadvantages of telephone or voice-messaging, such as vague to understand, easily to induce quarrel and tend to forgetful if not written down, outweigh its advantages in most of cases.

All in all, Email or text messaging is effective and efficient in exchanging ideas especially when we discuss upsetting or controversial problems.
总体蛮好的 可能都是叙述的实例 所以显得橘子有些琐碎 多变化下句式吧

zombiee

6.23

Have you ever read a book downloaded on your mobile phone or tablet computer anywhere you have time? Have you ever taken your online course via remote education network and sat in front of your screen to discuss or answer questions through microphone? Have you ever learned a foreign language by wearing your earphones to listen to the native speakers at any spare time? If you have never had such experiences, you would never know easier now to become educated than in the past.

No one can deny the fact that a person’s education is the most important aspect of his or her life. Thanks to the developed science and technology today, increasing education tools and material fill our minds with the latest knowledge and information. Nowadays education can be obtained at any time and at any place. “Knowledge is power”, whatever you want to learn, just search it on Internet, which connected with famous universities in the world, know-it-all encyclopedia, and professors service in any institute. Living in “information explosion age”, human race get what they eager to know more easily and efficiently. For instance, one high school in the state of Taxes in U.S. emancipates students from classroom, in other words, to free the students to accomplish their textbooks content in any way they like. This is a huge step to bring the children to the realistic world and educate them use the modern tools and whatever they acquire to inform themselves. They visit the real factory, study the technology in practice, and obtain knowledge more vividly and impressively to shed the restricted inhibition of the preaches by teachers. In fact, it is now easier to become educated than in the past due to the dramatic change in modern society and progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.

To the contrary, education is hard to obtain in the past. According to the historical recording , human race experienced a pains-taking path to obtain knowledge. Not to mention the prehistory times, in the last century, only a few people who are well financed and born in noble can have the right to be educated. The birthright to be educated equally has not been realized until a few decades ago, especially to women, the poor, and the disabled. Moreover, the only way to impart knowledge is to preach it in the class by teachers. Even worse is the person who cannot afford to school has no means to self-educated, due to the pains-taking effort to earn his or her life and isolation to the knowledge in expensive books.

Although the path to the wisdom and knowledge has been paved by science and technology, it must be admitted that, shortage of funds is still the one of the biggest questions that students nowadays have to face because that tuition fees and prices of books are soaring by the day. Increasing number of students at campus still have to take part-time jobs during their school time or pay their loan after graduation, let alone the drop-outs who have to give up their degree because of shortage of funds. However, this is the inevitable path to let everyone have their right of education. The cost of education is decreasing by the day.

From what has been discussed above, the conclusion that people are now easier to become educated than in the past can be safely draw.

phoebe0624

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