2月26日Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should allow their children to make mistakes and let them learn from their own mistakes.
There is a famous saying that "parents are the best teacher of the children". I think it is because parents always do their best to tell children right from wrong. When it comes to teaching, many would believe that parents should always teach the child right thing and prevent them from making a mistake, but i do believe that parents should allow their children to make mistake and let them learn from their own mistakes.
To begin with, making mistake is the nature of human, and human would learn more when they make a mistake. On the contrary, just tell the child what is right may not have the same influence, because the child may not understand why it is right or why it is wrong. When children are told not to torch fire, for instance, they would not believe it until they tried themselves. From such movement, the children would develop knowledge that the fire is hot and would hurt them, and they would no torch it any more. From this case we can see that world is pale, but the mistake tells the child a lot.
What is more, when parents tell the children what to do, the children would gradually develop a sense of dependence. Just imagine, what would a children do when they or she finds that what their parents tell is always correct? The child may lose intention of thinking, as it is a unnecessary process would cost energy. Eventually, he or she would not be willing to think every thing carefully, and following becomes their nature. Then, how can this kind of child live in the society when he or she grows up? They would meet a lot problem then.
Making a mistake is not always a bad thing. If one can learn something from it and would not make the same mistake any more, it would even be really a good one. And people can really learn a lot from the mistake they make. That is the reason why I support the idea that parents should allow their children to make mistakes and let them learn from such mistakes.
红色为错误，蓝色为疑惑or建议，高亮为精彩！ There is a famous saying that "parents are the best teachers of the children". I think it is because parents always do their best to tell children right from wrong. When it comes to teaching, many would believe that parents should always teach the child right thing and prevent them from making a mistake, but i do believe that parents should allow their children to make mistakes and let them learn from their own mistakes.(这个句子有点长，建议从but处断开)
To begin with, making mistakes is the nature(个人认为这里用nature不是很合适，但没有想好用什么词，也可以尝试换一种说法)of human, and human would learn more when they make a mistake. On the contrary, just tell(telling?) the child what is right may not have the same influence, because the child may not understand why it is right or why it is wrong(这个地方没有错误，就是觉得写得有点不够简洁呢、kid你再想想有没有比较好的表达能体现出right or wrong的). When children are told not to torch(touch?没有查到torch fire的用法呢……) fire, for instance, they would not believe it(it refers to what?) until they hadtried themselves. From such movement, the children would develop knowledge(increase knowledge) that the fire is hot and would hurt them, and then (我觉得加个then可能读起来逻辑更好些，我的本意还是觉得这个句子有点过长了……kid斟酌一下)they would no torch it any more. From this case we can see that world is pale(不太完全理解，从case中怎么看出pale了？？), but the mistake tells the child a lot.
What is more, when parents tell the children what to do, the children would gradually develop a sense of dependence. Just imagine, what would a children do when they or she finds that what their parents tell(what their parents told them) is always correct? The child may lose intention of thinking, as it is an unnecessary process whichwould cost energy. Eventually, he or she would not be willing to think every thing carefully, and following(obedience) becomes their nature. Then, how can this kind of child live in the society when he or she grows up? They would meet a lot problems then.
Making a mistake is not always a bad thing. If one can learn something from it and would not make the same mistake any more, it would even be really a good one. And people can really learn a lot from the mistake they make. That is the reason why I support the idea that parents should allow their children to make mistakes and let them learn from such mistakes. Noarkid文章写得还不错，个人建议多注意一下单复数和冠词的细节，多积累一些好的词汇和搭配~文章的开头写得很好！
4月的，求狠批 1.People attend college or university for many different reasons(for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people atten college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of the society, people nowadays have more chances to go to college or university to attain advanced education. There are a lot of reasons that people receive the college education. Some people would like to get new experiences. Some want to prepare for their careers in the future. Others are in university just for new knowledge. From my own perspective, I strongly hold the idea that people should go to university to find their real interest and increase knowledge about it.
First of all, interest is the best teacher for people. Because the university education is a transition from students' life to work life. It is important for students to find what they really enjoy. A study has shown that during the life of people, they spend one third of their time with work. If people won't work on something that they really have interest in. They won't live a happy life. For example, a friend of mine is interested in history. But his parents ask him to study finance because they think that it will be easier for their son to find a job. So he changes his major. However, although he studies hard in finance, he doesn't get a good score since he dones't enjoy his study at all. From this example, we can find that people should do jobs that is truly attractive to them.
Besides, people can't fulfill their dream only with interest. They need knowledge about it. Supporse a teenager who like computer science but has no knowledge about it. He maybe has interest in computer jsut like Bill Gates. But it is obviously wrong that if he wants to quit from the school juas as Bill did in the past. Bill quited from Harvard because he thought that he had enough knowledge about computer science. Since the boy has the right direction, the right thing he needs to do is to learn more about computer science and gain more experience which may be helpful in the future. We can't succeed only with dreams. Have the right direction and insist on it. One day, we can achieve our dreams.
In sum, university is a key time in our life. We ought to find the right direction of our life and hold on it. One old saying has told us that "No pains, no gains". If we want to become successful, we need to take the right direction and increase the knowledge about it in the university.
2月27日Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to buy a new technological device when it becomes available than to wait until many people have owned it.
As time goes by, the technology is developing rapidly. And many new devices come out more and more frequently. Every time there is a new device, thousands of people would rush into the shop and buy some of them without any hesitation. But I do not quite understand why they do such a thing. In fact I do think that a new technological device would not offer much enjoyable if people cannot share it with friends.
To begin with, a Chinese famous philosopher, Mengzi, once say "Those who do not play with others would not be as enjoyable as those who play." I totally agree with what he said. No man would be happy if he just play it alone. To examplify what I mean, just imagine, if a child just gets a toy, something like a transformer, and others do not have one, what would happen? The child may lend it to his friend, but finally, he or she may get bother with it, there would be no fun to lend toy to friends all the time.
On the contrary, if there are more people use the devise, those own the device would play together and without bothering each other. I think it would be much more enjoyable
Moreover the one standing out would always suffer a sense of lonely, which is nearly a universally acknowledge. Once I bought a new mountain bicycle, which is very expensive, and I cherished it a lot. And everything goes perfectly until my classmates known that I own an expensive bicycle. They began to critique me a lot as, because the bike is expensive, I did not borrow my bike to them. It was really not a good memory. To standing out is not always good. Things became positive when one day I lose my bike and every came back to normal.
To sum up, I think to buy a new technological device as soon as it become available cannot offer that much enjoyable. The cost of the new device is very high and the lonely would suffer is pain.
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To begin with, a Chinese famous philosopher, Mengzi, once say said "Those who do not play with others would not be as enjoyable as those who play." I totally agree with what he said. No man would be happy if he just play it alone. To examplify what I mean, just imagine, if a child just gets a toy, something like such as a transformer, and others do not have one, what would happen? The child may lend it to his friend, but finally, he or she就用He may get bother with it, there would be no fun to lend toy to friends all the time.
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Moreover， the one standing out would always suffer a sense of lonely, which应该用that，在GMAT里which只能代表lonely is nearly a universally acknowledge. Once I bought a new mountain bicycle, which is very expensive, and I cherished it a lot. And everything goes perfectly until my classmates known that I own had an expensive bicycle. They began to critique me a lot because the bike is expensive, I did not borrow my bike to them. It was really not a good memory. To standing out is not always good. Things became positive when one day I lose my bike and every came back to normal.
To sum up, I think to buy a new technological device as soon as it become available cannot offer that much enjoyable. The cost of the new device is very high and the lonely people would suffer is pain.
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