[求助]gwd-3-33

schen079

虽然已经有人讨论过了， 不过有一点很不明白。

gdw-3-Q33:

Almost a decade after New York State passed laws to protect patients by reducing the grueling hours worked by medical residents, twelve hospitals have been investigated by state medical officials, finding that all twelve consistently break the laws, many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, and that more than half the surgical residents work more than 95 hours a week.

twelve hospitals have been investigated by state medical officials, finding that all twelve consistently break the laws, many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, and that more than half the surgical residents work

an investigation by state medical officials of twelve hospitals have found all twelve consistently breaking the laws, that many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, with more than half the surgical residents working

an investigation of twelve hospitals by state medical officials has found that all twelve consistently break the laws, that many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, and that more than half the surgical residents work

twelve hospitals were investigated by state medical officials who found all twelve breaking the laws, with many residents working longer than 24 hours straight, and more than half the surgical residents work

an investigation by state medical officials has found that, of twelve hospitals, all twelve consistently break the laws, that many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, with more than half the surgical residents working

答案是C, 不过我选D.

C 从语法上讲没有太大问题， 不过， an investigation 可以做 has found 的主语吗？我上来就把B,C,E 排除了， 理由是逻辑上不通：调研不能发现，是政府官员通过调研发现吧。ETS不是最喜欢出这种语法上看似无误， 逻辑有问题的选项？

D 确实存在很多不顺眼的地方，但我看不出有致命的错误。

found 后面没有that，我觉得是found 不是主句的谓语，从句谓语引导的宾从that不是强制要的吧。（记得大全有类似的题目）

我的理解有问题吗？ 请教！谢谢!

schen079

自己顶一下！

colacat

state medical officials 不是人，不能用who

而今迈步从头越

D：twelve hospitals were investigated by state medical officials who found all twelve breaking the laws, with many residents working longer than 24 hours straight, and more than half the surgical residents work

firstly, D violates the parallelism by parellelling "all twelve breaking the laws" with "and more than half the surgical residenrts work"--a clause. Secondly, with many ...is awkard and no logical modifer. last but not least, it's needed to use a clause to describe what the officials found!

三脚猫

an investigation 可以做 has found 的主语吗？          当然可以，这道题也证明了这一点

schen079

谢谢各位！

officials 不是指官员吗？那指什么？

D：twelve hospitals were investigated by state medical officials who found all twelve breaking the laws, with many residents working longer than 24 hours straight, and more than half the surgical residents work

这句可不可以理解成 hospitals (主句主语） were investigated （谓语）by state medical officials （丛句主语）who found （丛句谓语）all........, （短语） with ........ （修饰前面短语）and (that) ....，（与前面段与并列）

这样解释也许牵强附会，但是我不理解 investgation 为什么可以做found 的主语。

能不能再解释一下？

colacat

我说错了，official可以指人

n.

1. One who holds an office or position, especially one who acts in a subordinate capacity for an institution such as a corporation or governmental agency.
2. Sports. A referee or umpire.

colacat

我觉的那个什么find啊，indicate啊，suggest啊，都会有这样的效果。

比如什么term suggests拉，investigation finds拉

schen079

以下是引用colacat在2005-3-5 1:15:00的发言：

我觉的那个什么find啊，indicate啊，suggest啊，都会有这样的效果。

比如什么term suggests拉，investigation finds拉

好像有道理， 非常感谢！

colacat

D：twelve hospitals were investigated by state medical officials who found all twelve breaking the laws, with many residents working longer than 24 hours straight, and more than half the surgical residents work

这句可不可以理解成 hospitals (主句主语） were investigated （谓语）by state medical officials （丛句主语）who found （丛句谓语）all........, （短语） with ........ （修饰前面短语）and (that) ....，（与前面段与并列）

我觉的也有问题 首先平行found all twelve breaking the laws和and more than half the surgical residents work  这个明显不平衡啊 就是你说后面是省略了that, 那它的结构也不是found that........,and that......

另外with many residents working longer than 24 hours straight 把平行关系，变成了从属关系，改变了句子的结构