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发表于 2005-3-3 04:26:00 | 只看该作者

TWE008

又来一篇,请大侠指正!

Topic008: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use
specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.





Television is a great invention. People thought so at least at its
invented time, while in modern time there has been a tendency that
television has taken more and more time of people. Even it was thought
to have destroyed the communication among friends and family. As to me,
I don't agree with this point.





Television has no fault itself. If people like watching TV and ignore
communicating, it does not contribute to TV which is an object only.
People can completely control their actions by themselves. Even if
there are very wonderful programs on TV, people should consider whether
they still have work or housework to do, whether they need walk around
or have a rest, and whether they should care for their family. I have
the experience. When I was at high school, I liked watching TV very
much and my family as well. When we came back from school or work, the
first thing was to turn on TV. In order not to miss any episode, We had
dinner in front of the TV. Generally, I found I had nothing to talk
with my parents and felt isolated from them. It did not become well
until we had cut the time on wathcing TV. The most important thing for
people who watch TV is that they should be selective and do not let TV
disturb their normal lives.









Furthermore, TV has the function of adding more topics for people's
communication. Our friends of the same age may like watching sports,
or  seeing detective films. So, we can invite them to look at
these programs in our home, eating snacks and drinking soda. We can
applaud at the wonderful parts of programs, develop our imagination to
solve the difficulty in films, and debate on different opinions. I
think it provides us another type of entertainment besides playing
cards, singing karaoke, and having meals with friends. In the same way
we can share good programs with our family too. Sometimes, parents
understand us much more by knowing our opinions on plays and thus
decrease the distinctions between generations.





In conclusion, TV does not prevent the normal communication between
people, on the contrary, the difficulty in communication is caused by
people themselves. Of course, people must control their time on
watching TV and concern talking with others often.









沙发
发表于 2005-3-3 18:09:00 | 只看该作者

1.建議樓主最好有五段,首尾加中間的三段

2.序述時,我想例子只要提供一個到兩個,簡單代過即可,不用講的太詳細

板凳
发表于 2005-3-3 19:26:00 | 只看该作者

感觉中文痕迹有点重,比如,It did not become well until we had cut the time on wathcing TV。划线部分可以改为,This situation did not change

地板
 楼主| 发表于 2005-3-4 12:37:00 | 只看该作者
嗯,我的英语有待继续提高,谢谢大侠们的帮助!
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