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毅仔

"Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.
(A) Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted
(B) Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both
(C) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted
(D) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted
(E) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both
 
both rooted in   and为什么是重复的。为什么解释说only make one point about。为什么用同位语和定语从句就是wordy?
求大神解答！！！！！

毅仔

自己顶一下！！

alzn2765

Both A and B, A和B结构上一定是对等的。单凭这一点，both rooted in A and B就是错的。

毅仔

alzn2765 发表于 2014-10-3 18:48
Both A and B, A和B结构上一定是对等的。单凭这一点，both rooted in A and B就是错的。 ...

请问Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington,不是对等的吗？谢谢！

陈大鱼

请注意这题both的位置
类比： they both like football
这句话both要修饰的其实是a body of work，所以是one point
另外，既然存在Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk这种可以一句话说明白的句法，那么定语从句和同位语从句跟他比较肯定是wordy啦