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第一次发帖不知道有没有什么格式要求啊。。。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.

Many, maintaining the viewpoint that the best way to travelis in a group led by a tour guide, claim that a guide can prepare a bestservice and arrangement for your. Nevertheless, as for me, visiting some famoussites following strict schedule can never be regarded as a travel.

With the rapid development of mobile industry, smartphone isfar more enough to provide all the information and navigation for us, whichprovides a prefect background for people to travel by themselves. Thus, thetour guides are no longer play an important role in a travelling. Instead, theinformation provided by tour guide, which comes from their long-termexperience, seems to be out of date and has little value. Different from theboring rotes and tedious activities recommended by guide, internet offer youexciting ideal come from travelers all over the world, which will definitelygive you a more memorable experience.

An additional factor of this point involves the flexibilityof travelling by oneself. One of the most common reasons for people to travelis to escape from the tight schedule of workdays and find an unfamiliar placeto relax themselves completely. However, following a travelling group means theunchangeable planning and fixed route. With this arrangement, the pleasure oftravelling will be exhausted due to the lack of limitation. Besides, join agroup always equal to endless compromise and follow the will of majorities.Imaging that you come to a place that really catch your attention, but you areunable to spend more time on it just because it violate the will of most peopleand will delay the whole timetable, what will you feel? This will obviouslyinfluence you mood in the following activities.

Finally, perhaps no one can deny the spirit of travelling isall about experiencing and exploring. A tour guide can provide you neither timenor opportunity to feel the characteristics of a city and to find something newby yourself. The sunrise and sunset in a small town, the smile and tears behinda metropolis, these are something you can never experience by just visitingsome well-known sceneries. Through your own preparation and designing, you willhave better understanding about this place, you will meet different friendswith same interests, you will undergo valuable difficulty which give you adeeper recognition about your life.

I admit that with a group guided by tour guide, you can savemore energy and money. However, you also “save” precious memories and excitingprocedures at the same time, which is the most valuable part of a travel. Ifyou are a person who want to experience a truly meaningful journey, a travelagency should never be you first choice.