【口语小分队】Emily的口语楼

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loverony713 发表于 2014-10-2 23:51
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5.   空闲时间用来做什么?

冏，你说得好快啊。。。。第一遍都没听懂。。。。

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loverony713 发表于 2014-10-2 23:51
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5.   空闲时间用来做什么?

10.2日作业修改意见

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内容稍微不太全
1、开头句缺乏整段的概括性语句，the lecture is talking about the relationship between verbal and nonverbal。你直接说nonverbal会加强。。。略显突兀
2、每一个例子后面缺乏一个此例如何证明这个理论的句子。比如，因为professor的gesture与verbal一致，所以他欢迎uncle的message得到加强。反之女儿的例子也是。

3.4 很完美，没问题

黄金5，信息量很大。充分显示了楼主的语言能力。但例子好像跟无老师的例子比较雷同，谨防与他人重复

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10.3 跟我们做的不一样哈。后面的没法改了。。。

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7.   描述一件自己印象深刻的celebration或者moment。

The most impressive moment for me is my eighteen-year-old birthday party. My birthday was on Monday, whenI woke up in the dormitory, everyone has hurried to the classroom withoutsaying any blessings. Feeling extremely disappointed, I ate the breakfast andwent to the library alone. It seemed that everyone forgot my birthday. When Ireturned to the dorm in the evening with a broken heart, suddenly the light wasturned off and colorful bulbs started shining! With a birthday cake presentedand the birthday song played, my roommates said loudly and excitedly, “Happybirthday EMILY! We do love u!” Immediately, I burst out of tears. Then theyshowed the presents for me, a red lipstick, a new notebook, and a lovely toybear. I felt so touched and that was the most unforgettable moment for me.  

8.   Whichone acts more influence on you newspaper, TV or teachers?

I definitely thinkthat it is TV that influences me most.

First, from the newsbroadcasting in the television, we can know what is happening in the outsideworld without stepping out home. We can learn the latest scientific discoveryand research from the program Discovery and TED. Both newspaper and teachercannot provide that latest information.

Second, watchingtelevision is a good way to release exhaust and burden, because there arevarious appealing TV series such as the Big Bang Theory, Friends, and ModernFamily. After watching those amusing TV series, I can refresh my mind andrecharge the battery. Also, I enjoy sharing the feeling with families, whichadds color to the dull routine of everyday life.

daisy333

loverony713 发表于 2014-10-5 23:15
7.   描述一件自己印象深刻的celebration或者moment。The most impressive moment for me is my eighteen-y ...

12题的内容都好充实哈，也崇拜楼主的语速！但是考试的时候写不了这么多不知道会不会很慌
问题有几个：
1.时间都超过45s了哦
2.有些单词的发音还是不太准
3.语音上可以改善一些些，感觉每句话的语音都是上扬的诶

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loverony713 发表于 2014-10-5 09:41
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emily的语速绝对是一大亮点，这样在一分钟内的内容十分全面啊！我每次就是说太慢说不完TAT
就一些小的口误，比如男生说she，然后应该是under pressure不是in pressure。问题不大，棒棒哒！

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daisy333 发表于 2014-10-6 16:32
12题的内容都好充实哈，也崇拜楼主的语速！但是考试的时候写不了这么多不知道会不会很慌
问题有几个：
1. ...

THANKS!!!! 你也可以的么么哒！！！！