【口语小分队】Emily的口语楼

loverony713

晚加入了几天 自己默默把TPO 1 2 补上~~~

这里是9-30 TPO3 TASK 3456的作业~ 黄金口语 3、4

感冒速速好起来！！！声音听着好别扭！~ 说话也不利落 大家注意身体！！~

3.   Describe the most important decision that you made in your life.

Personally, the most important decision that I have made in my life is to participate in the student union when I was in the university.

First, my personality has changed a lot. Previously, I was an introverted and shy girl, but after I joined the student union, I was very active in various activities and took great pleasure in making new friends. My enthusiastic workmates affected me a lot, and I unconsciously became an outgoing girl like them.

Second, I met my best friend Amy, when we organized the Christmas Party together. We shared the feeling of delight and depression simultaneously. [,sɪml'teɪnɪəslɪ] Sometimes we were scolded by leaders or teachers, but we consoled each other and soon started to move on. Our relationship was cultivated in the mutual encouragement and concern.

4.   Do you think the high school should teach music and art as other basic science?

Music and art should be the vital component of school curriculum.

To study music is to study the basics. For example, when I leaned the play of Shakespeare, I also studied his creation background, that is to say, the European Renaissance Period. Furthermore, I compared his writing styles with other celebrities such as Boccaccio [bəu'ka:tʃiəu]. Not only did I supplement the knowledge of European History, but also aroused the interest of literature via learning music and art.

In addition, music, like reading, writing and speaking, conveys thoughts, ideas and feelings. It also provides an avenue for developing self-expression and creativity.

loverony713

啦啦啦自己默默补上~~~ 黄金口语&TPO1

1.说出你认为对你最有用的一本书，并解释原因。

The most important book for me is The Old Man and The Sea.
First, the protagonist [prə'tæɡənɪst], Santiago, [,sænti:'eiɡəu], tells me never surrender to my opponent. Santiago is an aging fisherman who struggles with a giant marlin far out in the Gulf Stream. Though he failed eventually, his spirit of never giving up touched me.

Second, the famous saying from Santiago inspired me a lot----A man can be destroyed but not defeated. Last year I only got 600 in my GMAT examination, and felt frustrated. But when I read the book again, I cheered up and threw away all the depression. At last, with the encouragement from the book, I got 700 in the second GMAT exam.

2. 电视对于现代社会有正面作用还是负面作用，选择其中之一并解释原因。

Personally, I think television has more positive effects towards the modern society than its negative sides.
First, from the news broadcasting in the television, we can know what is happening in the outside world without stepping out home. We can learn the latest scientific discovery and research from the program Discovery.

Second, watching television is a good way to release exhaust and burden, because there are various appealing TV series such as the Big Bang Theory, Friends, and Modern Family. After watching those amusing TV series, I can refresh my mind and recharge the battery. Also, I enjoy sharing the feeling with families, which adds color to the dull routine of everyday life.

loverony713

10-1 TPO TASK2 3456

loverony713

10-2 TPO 4 TASK 3456

5.   空闲时间用来做什么?

Personally, in my spare time, I prefer to go to a small town where my grandparents live with charming ocean view. I mean the sky there is so blue and the beach is full of sunshine. You know how romantic it can ever be, just relax yourself on the beach, when the sun is setting down, the ocean breeze is blowing and the seabirds are singing.

Furthermore, my grandparents and I enjoy going to some restaurants offering the best seafood such as lobsters and tuna fish. I really cherish the time with my well-beloved grandparents. Although I am immersed with workloads every day, after a short time relaxing, I could refresh my mind and recharge the battery.

6.   打手机该不该在一些地方禁止？

I strongly agree that the use of a mobile phone should be forbidden in some places, such as library and airplanes.

First, the most common reason for people going to a library is to find a silent environment to read without interruption. But if you receive a phone call in the library or just send out messages, the mobile phone will ring. Though people have personal right to use their mobile phone, the others are not supposed to be involved in the unnecessary disturbance.

Another place is airplane. As we all know that it is very dangerous to have a phone call during the flight. Using mobile phones may causes interference between the signals. As a result, passengers’ safety cannot be guaranteed.

sclovexj

天你的速度真的太快了
我晚上回来，把录音弄好了一半，明天上传余下的

loverony713

sclovexj 发表于 2014-10-3 00:22
天你的速度真的太快了
我晚上回来，把录音弄好了一半，明天上传余下的

说快了能听懂么.... 这个比较关键......

sclovexj

说的时候就是有点点rush，流利程度和组织结构，句法用词很好。
第二次修改，其他的需要如何来评价？

sclovexj

loverony713 发表于 2014-10-3 09:05
说快了能听懂么.... 这个比较关键......

我的意思是你上传的速度快，
口语速度是rush的向前，因为很清晰所以都能听懂，

benhuang1991

Reply: Task Oct 1st TPO 2-3\4\5\6
综合来讲，水平很好，内容齐全结构清晰
但是还有一些小小的问题， 如下：
1. 存在以下小的语法错误，我想这是因为紧张的缘故
2. 语句有些时候有些不连贯，当然听声音有可能是感冒或者其他缘故
3. 我不太确定有些语句ETS是否能听懂，因为文化背景的问题，以及我们第一语言的差异性导致有些语句在意思表达上是直接由中文翻译英文而成的，所以在表达上也许存在一些问题。
以上就是我的评价，只能提供一些非官方的言论，还望包含。

sclovexj

benhuang1991 发表于 2014-10-4 03:54
Reply: Task Oct 1st TPO 2-3\4\5\6
综合来讲，水平很好，内容齐全结构清晰
但是还有一些小小的问题， 如下 ...

@benhuang1991,就是比如说我们怎么样给对方评价，需要注重那些细节呢？以提高更好，或是相互提高