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搜了半天找到了RON的原话~~~~~
也就是我2#总结的~~大家也看看
过来,总结一下:
先引述RON得
1) when you use a COMMA -ING modifier after a clause**, you should actually satisfy TWO requirements:
-- the modifier should modify the action of the preceding clause, as you have stated;
AND
-- the subject of the preceding clause should also make sense as the agent of the -ING action.
examples:
Joe broke the window, angering his father. --> this sentence makes sense, because it correctly implies that joe "angered his father".
the window was broken by Joe, angering his father. --> this sentence doesn't make sense, because it implies that the window (i.e., not joe himself) angered joe's father.
my brother tricked me, disappointing Dad --> implies that dad is disappointed in my brother for tricking me (and not necessarily disappointed in me for being tricked).
i was tricked by my brother, disappointing Dad --> implies that dad is disappointed in me because i fell for my brother's trick (and not that he's disappointed in my brother for tricking me).
再重复一下
COMMA+ VERBING
1) LOOK AT THE SUBJECT. IF IT IS NOT LOGIC-- PASS~
2) LOOK AT rON'S WORDS. i F IT CAN NOT FIT EITHER (1) OR(2),WILL PASS~
PS: COMMA+VERBED
DEFINITELY, DIRECTLY, IMMEDIATELING MODIFY THE NOUN. hahaha,! if it is not logic, well pass it |
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