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突击作文的方法----给所有速度慢的XD(机考)+偶自己的小摸班

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发表于 2005-2-5 02:21:00 | 只看该作者
对对, fbfamous讲的好, 精彩!!
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-2-6 09:34:00 | 只看该作者

摸班1:


Recently there is a debate over whether high school should require students to wear school uniforms. Some people assert that high school should permit students to decide what to wear in school, while other people believe that students should be only allowed to wear school uniforms in school. As a matter of fact, this is a complex and controversial issue. Different people hold different views due to their different backgrounds. Accordingly, it is impossible for us to give a universal answer to this question. As far as I am concerned, I agree that students should be asked to wear only school uniforms in school. I will prove my point of view by following discussion.


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Certainly, we could not ignore the advantages from wearing what students want in school, such as makeing them enjoy lives. Taking the practical situation into account that learning knowledge and skills is the most important thing in school, however, we can safely draw the conclusion that school should require students to wear school uniforms in school.


黄的大家不要看了,是我写的练习之一,呵呵。但是要强调的是:转折很重要!但是没必要单写一段,我想最后一段用个小转折就OK了,因为我们毕竟主要还是说另外一方面嘛。


摸班2:


It seems, in so many items, very difficult to choose one of the animals to be the most important animal in my country. Because all of them in my country have their special functions and characteristics. But it does not mean that they are the same to me. To be frank, I would choose panda as the most important animal in my country if the practical situation that panda is such an animal that lives only in China is considered. To explain my point of view, I will illustrate it in following three aspects.


因为是列举题目,所以最后简单总结一下就OK,2,3句话足够了。


[此贴子已经被作者于2005-2-6 9:37:16编辑过]
13#
发表于 2005-2-8 03:07:00 | 只看该作者
模板在哪里?看不到。
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-2-8 04:14:00 | 只看该作者
在您头顶上
15#
发表于 2005-2-8 04:36:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用fbfamous在2005-2-8 4:14:00的发言:
在您头顶上


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发表于 2005-2-13 06:52:00 | 只看该作者
thank you so much
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发表于 2005-2-19 22:36:00 | 只看该作者
OK!
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-2-22 06:28:00 | 只看该作者
大家不用客气,有问题一起讨论,彼此提高嘛!
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发表于 2005-2-23 12:05:00 | 只看该作者
thanks!!!
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发表于 2005-2-23 12:51:00 | 只看该作者

好样儿的~

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