还是manhattan sc问题

conglomerator · 发表于 2014-8-23 16:18:33

Based on the recent decline in enrollment, the admissions office decided to reevaluate its recruitment strategies.
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Based on the recent decline in enrollment, it is decided to reevaluate its recruitment strategies by admissions office.对吗？如果不对，要保留based on 怎么改？

lainemai · 发表于 2014-8-24 16:38:24

不对吧，你后面出现了两个It，指代有不清的问题啊。。。

conglomerator · 发表于 2014-8-24 21:06:00

Based on the recent decline in enrollment, reevaluation of recruitment strategies is decided by admissions office. 对吗？

ashlyzhu · 发表于 2014-8-24 22:33:50

conglomerator 发表于 2014-8-24 21:06
Based on the recent decline in enrollment, reevaluation of recruitment strategies is decided by adm ...

我同意。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。

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