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麻烦帮看这句话有错吗?准确吗?

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楼主
发表于 2005-1-28 07:10:00 | 只看该作者

麻烦帮看这句话有错吗?准确吗?

Now I am going to couple my expedition with tens of thousands of books, which are a long written literary compositions instead of complicated graph and numerical digits, that fascinated me since I was 5 years old.

沙发
发表于 2005-1-28 10:28:00 | 只看该作者

Now I am going to couple my expedition with tens of thousands of books, which are a long written literary compositions instead of complicated graph and numerical digits, that fascinated me since I was 5 years old.

Simplify your sentence,

Now I'm going to couple my expedition with books, which are compositions instead of graph and digits, that facinated me.

非限制性定语从句 which ... , 限定性定语从句 that ..., 均修饰 books.

建议将此句分为:

1. Now I'm going to couple my expedition with books, which are compositions instead of graph and digits.

2. Books that facinated me.

或者:

Now I'm going to couple my expedition with books, which are compositions instead of graph and digits and have facinated me.

板凳
发表于 2005-1-28 15:59:00 | 只看该作者
另外, instead of, 用rather than比较好.
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