请各路大神修改下2篇小作文模板！！急！！在线等。。。

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求各路大神分析修改一下以下两篇小作文模板 写的都是lecturer和reading是对立观点的模板：
第一篇

In the lecture,the professor makes several points about 听力的观点. On the other hand, the reading contendsthat 阅读的观点. Thenarrator casts doubts on the idea of the author of the reading by listing anumber of contrary opinions to the reading.

The first pointthat the professor uses to refuse the reading is that 听力论点A. According tohim, 听力A理由. However,this is different from the reading which states that 阅读论点A.

Moreover, contraryto the belief in the passage that 阅读论点B, the professor asserts that 听力论点B. To bespecific, 听力理由B.

Finally, theprofessor points out that 听力论点C. This is not what the reading says. The reading lists阅读论点C. The lecture’slast point casts doubt on the reading on the basis of 听力理由C.

第二篇

The focus of the reading materialand the lecture is:听力和阅读的观点 e.g.: whether a is  more important than b） Apparently, the lecture refutes the pointsillustrated in the reading material. According to the narrator/ professor,听力的观点, while on the contrary, thereading material contends oppositely that 阅读的观点

The first point the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is that_听力观点1__, to be specific 听力理由1 which differs from the statement in the reading that_阅读观点1__.   

Another evidence the narrator/professor adopts to contradict the passage is___听力观点2_____.However, the reading states that___阅读观点2_____. （视字数多少加减此条观点陈述）while alternatively speaking, 听力理由2

Furthermore, the professor assertsthat __听力观点3__according to him 听力理由3  This is another pointraised to rebut the view of the reading material that ____阅读观点3__.

In the conclusion, the point madein the lecture contrasts with whatis presented in the reading. As the professor claims, __听力观点______whereas the readingmaterial holds that__阅读观点______.

大家感觉哪个比较好一点？
小作文中间一定需要给出理由吗？还是说陈述双方观点就好了？

谢各位！