学渣征服sc的几点总结：比较、代词、修饰语一次搞定

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陈大鱼

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lyb1223

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desperado1412

试试，多谢楼主

dabaolurker

比较也一直是我的弱项。感谢楼主的分享，读了一部分，但碰到一些问题于是想请教一下。

例1. OG10-19. In addition to having more protein than wheat does, the protein in rice is higher quality than that in wheat, with more of the amino acids essential to the human diet.
(A)        the protein in rice is higher quality than that in
(B)        rice has protein of higher quality than that in
(C)        the protein in rice is higher in quality than it is in
(D)        rice protein is higher in quality than it is in
(E)        rice has a protein higher in quality than
解释是
B, the best choice, logically compares wheat to rice by placing the noun rice immediately after the initial clause. B also uses that to refer to protein in making the comparison between the proteins of rice and wheat. Choice E needs either that in or does after wheat to make a complete and logical comparison.

正确句子则是Rice has protein of higher quality than that in wheat. 比较对象是rice的protein和wheat的protein。这题我没有问题。

但接下来两个例2, 3就不懂了。

例2： Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man-eater of the movies—fewer than those have been killed by bee stings
楼主总结中，例2中红色的those是不能加的，具体原因如下：
在rice has a protein higher in quality than that in wheat这个句子里，比较对象是protein和that（that指代的也是protein），比较的仅仅是protein（rice has不在比较成分之内，比较的是protein的属性），所以允许平行。而在Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man-eater of the movies—fewer than …中， 不仅仅Only seven people，后面的this century have been killed by the great white shark也都在比较对象里面，所以后文不能用those killed by bee stings，而应该用平行的结构than have been killed。

但上面解释有两点不是很懂。1）上面例2比较的内容可以简单的理解为人数的比较吗？7 people比上被蜜蜂扎的人数 2）than have been killed显然是一个省略句，如果要补足的话，应该如何补足呢？

例3：According to recent studies comparing the nutritional value of meat from wild animals and meat from domesticated animals, wild animals have less total fat than (that of) livestock fed on grain and more of a kind of fat thought to be good for cardiac health
楼主文档中正确句子是不能加that of的。原因是：其在livestock前加上that of…比较的对象是animals has less fat和that，that指代fat，而事实上比较的应该是wild animals和livestock的属性，即拥有fat的多少。

例3结构貌似与例1有点相似啊。回顾例1 Rice has protein of higher quality than that in wheat.  所以是不是不能说rice has more protein than that of wheat？但如果句子如果改成animals have less total fat than do livestock fed on grain可以吗？

望赐教。非常感谢！

chchwow

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blackhearted

Thanks a lot

gloria1128

楼主好棒！多谢分享~