Alex是来打酱油滴——第二季

chasedreamabc

写在第二季前面的话
又不是美剧，哪里来的第二季，其实呢，之前的贴子太久远，沉的太深，懒得找了

最近一直是蘑菇一个人占座，企鹅队长辛苦代改，特来打酱油，分担队长的负担。。。咳咳咳。。。高风亮节有米有，六一节的小红花当之无愧的归属有木有。。。在这个马上就要高考的时间里，依旧心系小分队，只求11能把我拉到NYC。

好久没写，找找感觉

小蘑菇开始打怪

好棒！！！！我这就去写昨天的作业。。

chasedreamabc

小蘑菇开始打怪 发表于 2014-6-1 15:13
好棒！！！！我这就去写昨天的作业。。

我写的是6.1的

小蘑菇开始打怪

chasedreamabc 发表于 2014-6-1 16:38
我写的是6.1的

我知道~~儿童节快乐！！

chasedreamabc

6.1
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is easier for parents to raise children today than it was 50 years ago

Muchhas changed in society in the last 50 years. The advent and proliferation of personalcomputers, the widespread adoption of cell-phones, and the invention of theinternet have all had a visible impact on how parents interact with theirchildren. Not all of the changes have necessarily been positive, but I believethese shifts over the last 50 years have made it easier overall for parents toraise their children.

Technology has probably been the biggestelement to affect the parenting landscapein the last half-century.  Personalcomputing, for example, has given parents the ability to teach their childrenin unconventional ways using educational software. I myself remember reinforcingbasic math and science knowledge through poorly-animated, two dimensionalcomputer games in elementary school; nowadays, the software being offered isfar more advanced.  In a different vein,cell phones have provided parents with a means of staying in touch with theirchildren over long distances, so parents no longer have to worry as much aboutcontacting their children during emergencies. And finally, the internet givesparents a powerful set of tools on both the education and communication fronts:a wealth of information—on not only educational topics for children, butalso child-rearing advice for parents—available atone's fingertips, as well as various options for maintaining contact

As hinted at above, the vast troves ofparenting knowledge available today—as well as just better general parentalawareness—also help make parenting easier in the 21st century. Developmentalpsychology has made great strides in understanding the mental processes of childrenas they grow, and many of those scientific theories have trickled down intosociety to form the basis of a lot of common sense advice—like for example,that parents should try to strike a balance between guiding children andletting them be independent, and between being affectionate and being stern.But even if one could not intuit such theories, there are literally thousandsof books written on the subject of parenting and likely many thousands moreworth of articles on the internet.  Thesetake much of the guesswork out of the messy ordeal of raising a child.

This abundance of technology andinformation can be somewhat of a double edged sword, of course.  For one thing, parents must now monitortheir children's usage of all this new technology—computers, cell phones, andthe internet can easily become time-wasting distractions or evenlife-threatening dangers. For another thing, parents might feel overwhelmed byhow much parenting information if available now—though most theories probablyagree on the broad strokes, there are many competing schools of thought thatdiffer on the exact details of how to best raise children. As all these thingsbecome more and more embedded in our daily lives, however, parents should findthat navigating these potential difficulties becomes second nature.

Overall, I believe the changes have beenfor the better. Though many new challenges and obstacles have arisen as well,the tools parents have gained have made raising children an easier task than 50years ago

超级无敌小鹤鹤

alex，我是企鹅，本来想吹毛求疵的改你的作文的，不过学霸让学渣改你的作文你认为合适么。。。。。。没啥好改的，满篇赞，只有一个细节提醒你注意一下，书面语里internet的首字母要大写。惭愧了，我要练作文

chasedreamabc

6.2 should  drivers pay a certain amount of fees in order to be permitted to drive out in traffic busy time

Urban transportation has always been a focused concern of governments. The overwhelming pressure on the major streets in rush hours causes an undesirable waste of time and energy. Being stuck in the long queues of vehicles seems to be a common encounter by city dweelers every day. Faced with such a cruel reality, governments ought to adopt effective measures to elimate the unnecessary frustrations and waste incurred by traffic jams. Honestly speaking, it might be an efficient choice for drivers to pay a certain amount of fees in order to be permitted to drive during busy traffic time.

Obviously, this measure is destined to help reduce car use at peat times. For fear of being fined or losing money, people may deliberatedly avoid driving to work. Paying fees proves to be the most effective way to manipulate peopele's personal behavior in public, as it is in line with people's general psychological state. Such an adoption is actually not unique to a single nation. Similar versions of this move have been enacted in numerous regions and countries and have produced good results. For instance, traffic jam fees were introduced in Singapore in 1975. Since then, many countries have followed suit. According to the statistics conducted by the authority, these fees could bring traffic volumes down by between 10 to 20 percent, and increase the speed of traffic flow by up to 20 percent.

In addition, this meausre will help raise more captial for the city's infrastructure construction. An advanced public transportation system is crucial to a city's overall development and the quality of life of its inhabitants. Making use of the fees to upgrade the broad network of urban mass transportation is a wise choice on the part of the government. More super highways ought to be built to ease worsening traffic and more overpasses should be erected. There is already a greater demand to enlarge the scale of subway lines and increase the number of bus routes. All these projects will consume a large amount of money. Thus, to some extent, charging fees ease these heavy financial burdens.

In general, the improvement of traffic conditions depends on unified contributions from the government and the masses as a whole. Effective proposals ought to be supported by the public. Concerning all the merits indicated in the previous paragraphs, it is self-evident that charging traffic jam fees helps ease the general burden of transportation during busy hours.

sweetyecho

错误修改好
Urban transportation has always been a focused concern of governments. The overwhelming pressure on the major streets in rush hours causes an undesirable waste of time and energy. Being stuck in the long queues of vehicles seems to be a common encounter by city dweelers every day. Faced with such a cruel reality, governments ought to adopt effective measures to elimate the unnecessary frustrations and waste incurred by traffic jams. Honestly speaking, it might be an efficient choice for drivers to pay a certain amount of fees in order to be permitted to drive during busy traffic time.

Obviously, this measure is destined to help reduce car use at peat times. For fear of being fined or losing money（fined 和losing money意思稍有重复）, people may deliberatedly avoid driving to work. Paying fees proves to be the most effective way to manipulate peopele's personal behavior in public, as it is in line with people's general psychological state. Such an adoption is actually not unique to a single nation. Similar versions of this move have been enacted in numerous regions and countries and have produced good results. For instance, traffic jam fees were introduced in Singapore in 1975. Since then, many countries have followed suit. According to the statistics conducted by the authority, these fees could bring traffic volumes down by between 10 to 20 percent, and increase the speed of traffic flow by up to 20 percent.

In addition, this meausre will help raise more captial for the city's infrastructure construction. An advanced public transportation system is crucial to a city's overall development and the quality of life of its inhabitants. Making use of the fees to upgrade the broad network of urban mass transportation is a wise choice on the part of the government. More super highways ought to be built to ease worsening traffic and more overpasses should be erected. There is already a greater demand to enlarge the scale of subway lines and increase the number of bus routes. All these projects will consume a large amount of money. Thus, to some extent, charging fees ease these heavy financial burdens.

In general, the improvement of traffic conditions depends on unified contributions from the government and the masses as a whole. Effective proposals ought to be supported by the public. Concerning all the merits indicated in the previous paragraphs, it is self-evident that charging traffic jam fees helps ease the general burden of transportation during busy hours.

Alex大神，我前前后后看了三遍，都不知道改哪儿，请恕罪哇～～～全部都是高亮～
唯一的不足吧，是不是内容少了点儿？
还有一个疑问，如果我们把文章写在这里，不用附件形式，一旦考试中了这些题目，我们原文写上去，有没有可能会被判作弊啊？

超级无敌小鹤鹤

我是来顶Alex的！！！！！！！！！！

chasedreamabc

sweetyecho 发表于 2014-6-3 21:58
错误修改好
Urban transportation has always been a focused concern of governments. The ov ...

不会的，机器人的查重不是在这里搜的