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[0520-综合]修改Johnny的文章 TPO6 The reading passage introduces three reasons why commnal（这个本来是想写什么单词，common嘛？communal？） online encyclopedias were less valuable than traditional printed encyclopedias: errors, fabrication, and confusion. However, the lecture disagrees. The professor says they are only small prices for the advance of this great tools and certainly online encyclopedias exceed（是不是应该用单数？我也很困惑百科全书到底是单数还是复数） traditional encyclopedias in many ways.
To start with, contrary to the assertion in the reading passage that online encyclopedias have more errors than traditional encyclopedias, the professor claims that in fact both online and traditional encyclopedias have many errors. There is no denying that people cannot found a perfect encyclopedias from online or offline. However, one great advantage of online encyclopedias is that it is much easier to be corrected while a traditional encyclopedia need decades years to be corrected. Therefore, online encyclopedias obviouly （笔误吧，obviously）beat traditional encyclopedias when it comes to errors.（这段和楼主听到的反驳是一样的，但是我写的怎么就跟失忆一样。。）
Furthermore, the professor argues that we should never worry about the problem of fabrication caused by online encyclopedias. The main reason is that people have adopted two strategies to deal with this problem. The first one is to use a specific formation to prevent anybody to make a change. The second（换成another可以显得多样一点吧。。其实也没差多少。。） one is to hire special professional editor （复数形式好一点）to maintain the encyclopedias. That is to say, fabrication is no more a major weakness of online encyclopedias.（果然我听错了。。楼主写得真好！）
What is more, the passage assumes that online encyclopedias have mislead general population（population是人口的意思，我觉得这里用public更合适吧。我上goggle上查了一下两者的意思，都存在这样的用法，但是general public指的是广大群众，general population指的是一般人群，比如抽样的样本啊和总体的男女比例相同这样。我觉得楼主的意思是general public吧。。） about the hot topics. But the professor refutes that this assumption is not supported by evidence. In fact one of the greatest merit（one of的短语后面的可数名词应该用复数，所以是merits，话说我自己还没用过merit这个词来表示优点，学了一招~）of online encyclopedias is that it can represent people's interests widely. On contrary, tradition encyclopedias have very limited capability to show people's interests.
总结：楼主听写得真的很好啊！几乎都是听力中的内容了，想想我自己那篇，第二点有一半都是编的。。然后略有笔误什么的注意一下就好，反正评分的时候会谅解的。最后查了一下Google和wiki，encyclopedias是复数。。是啊有s的嘛，然后单数形式就是没有s的。
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发表于 2014-5-21 23:46:54
