请问comma+v-ing 是否能承前修饰N的的问题

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og13 111题A mutual fund having billions of dollars in assets will typically invest that money in hundreds of companies, rarely holding more than one percent of the shares of any particular corporation.



A正确
companies, rarely holding more than one percent


Bcompanies, and it is rare to hold at least one percent or more

Ccompanies and rarely do they hold more than one percent

Dcompanies, so that they rarely hold more than one percent

Ecompanies; rarely do they hold one percent or more  


og104Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(A)Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,

(B)In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(C)In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter正确

(D)Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations

(E)Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and
第一道a选项的holding是结果状语。逻辑主语是前面整句话然后这个holding的动作apply to the subject of the previous clause"the mutual fund"
第二道题a选项错误在于 现在分词没能清晰的修饰，有人说是因为coordinating 可能修饰illustration引起歧义，如果是这样的话 holding不是也能修饰companies了么

如果他说的不对，第二题a选项不考虑主谓间隔过大这个问题，还有什么错误呢？

求大神解答。。。谢谢！

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求NN来解答一下。。。。万分感谢！！！！

kiwifoodtown

对于第二题，一些人的解释有误，A选项不是因为coordinating 可能修饰illustration而产生歧义，而是因为coordinating them with her narratives无法正确而又清晰的表达illustration 而产生了错误。

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kiwifoodtown 发表于 2014-2-20 09:01
对于第二题，一些人的解释有误，A选项不是因为coordinating 可能修饰illustration而产生歧义，而是因为coor ...

可不可以这样理解，ving 为壮语向后修饰谓语，但是them逻辑上又应该向前修饰illustration，所以不清晰？

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mogu724 发表于 2014-2-20 11:27
可不可以这样理解，ving 为壮语向后修饰谓语，但是them逻辑上又应该向前修饰illustration，所以不清晰？ ...

我不这么认为，coordinating在这里的确可以看成状语，但和修饰谓语无关，而illustration却的确需要一个明确的定语加以修饰，否则句子很难表达完整，coordinating显然没有起到这个定语的作用，所以说它修饰不清晰。

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kiwifoodtown 发表于 2014-2-20 13:12
我不这么认为，coordinating在这里的确可以看成状语，但和修饰谓语无关，而illustration却的确需要一个明 ...

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