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我20号考，所以现在也是临阵磨枪了。最让我担心的是听力和作文。
现在说说作文。我文科的，中文的作文就不用说了。可一写英文就犯困。想象力倒也丰富，编出三个理由倒也容易，思路不至于枯竭。但问题就是词汇非常简单兼白痴。估计也就中学英文作文的水平。
所以模板对我来说简直是如获至宝。依旧着练了几篇，虽有些文章稍嫌别扭，但也好在整篇文章有点深度了（至少有些漂亮的联结词）但是！最近竟然连发模板慎用通告。害得我心惶惶然。打开mm给的网站，好是好，但实在是自卑之极。看了上面6分的文章才知道自己的简直不堪入目！
其实我要求不高，总分只要到230就足矣。可是听力乃本人死项。运气好可以拿个20出头的分，运气不好……估计就初练pp时的水平——18.所以我不能放弃作文，再怎么样也要拿个5分才行。可是现在看看人家的好文与自家的差距……惭愧呀！！！！
现献上本人拙作一篇，大家帮忙看看，看现在有没有4.5。这是第9篇了呀！！！
8．Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend time alone pr with friends? Give your reasons. (110)
Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Meanwhile others like to be with friends most of time. from my point of view, I prefer to spend most of my time with my friends. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my viewpoint.
The essential reason which can be seen by everyone is that most of us are actually afraid of loneliness. From our childhood, we want to attract other people’s attention, and we want to stay in the group. We like to talk with others. We want to share happiness and failure with others. We don’t like to stay at home alone facing the darkness and fear. Of course there are some dissocial people who don’t like to stay with other people. But they are just the minority. Most of us like to stay with friends most of the time because we don’t like the loneness. This is the main reason why I vote to stay with friends.
Another reason is that you can learn much knowledge from the friends which can’t be known by yourself. Different people have different characters. You can know about other kinds of personalities. Of course, everybody has his own advantages and disadvantages. You can study others’ advantages and conquer your disadvantages. In our whole lifetime, we should study how to adapt ourselves to the society. And staying with friends will teach you how to get well with others. You can know about society from your little group.
The last reason is that if you stay with friends, you can solve problems easily. For example, if you can’t answer math questions, you can consult with your friends. Perhaps there are some people who know how to answer the question. So they will explain it to you, and you can obtain the knowledge which you can’t get by yourself. This is the value of friends. They will help each other. And if you stay with friends, you can get more news, enjoy more happy time. So this is the reason why I prefer to spend most time with friends.
Of course, you also need some time alone. You can think about something quietly. You also should have you own personality when you meet some problems. But you should spend most of the time with friend.
Because you are part of the society, so you should stay in the group, from which you can get more enjoyable time and find the way to solve problems. These are the reasons why I prefer to stay with friends in most of my time.
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发表于 2005-1-12 14:01:00
