TWE72,谢谢指点

xuli_123

74\Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Grades(marks) encourage students to learn. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Whether grades encourage learning or not is a debated topic to everyone because it determines the studying tendency to every student. Some of them admit the score plays a very important role in his studying life, but others don’t think so. As far as I am concerned, the grades not only encourage one’s learning but also encourage one’s interesting.

To begin with, good students who want to study in a perfect school need a high mark. Without it, they have not more chances to follow a good teacher who can teach them many things in which they are interested. An example can be given that only one who owning an enough high score of TOEFL and GMAT has a qualification to enter into top 10 business schools in America, that is the reason why so many students look the high score as their final goal.

Scholarship is another reason that stimulates student to learn for gaining high grades. Some students think that high score means money. In their eyes, one of the most important things is that the highest score which can bring him the scholarship and thus solve the financial problem especial for poor one. To these students ,the higher grades they have, the more scholarship they own. if you can see that, you can understand it more deeply.

Finally, score encourages the interesting of study. For a student who have high mark, he will have more interests to learn that subject, however, for those students who own a low mark, they also want to learn hard to gain a high score. When one put his heart in study, they will find the pleasure of learning.

To sum up, given the reasons discussed above, we can safely reach the conclusion that grades not only encourage students to learn, but also encourage them to learn better.

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-1-11 21:35:46编辑过]

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以下是引用xuli_123在2005-1-11 21:34:00的发言：

74\Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Grades(marks) encourage students to learn. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Whether grades encourage learning or not is a debated topic to everyone because it determines the studying tendency to every student. Some of them admit the score plays a very important role in his studying life, but others don’t think so. As far as I am concerned, the grades not only encourage one’s learning but also encourage one’s interesting.

To begin with, good students who want to study in a perfect school need a high mark. Without it, they have not more chances to follow a good teacher who can teach them many things in which they are interested. An example can be given that only one who owning an enough high score of TOEFL and GMAT has a qualification to enter into top 10 business schools in America, that is the reason why so many students look the high score as their final goal.

Scholarship is another reason that stimulates student to learn for gaining high grades. Some students think that high score means money. In their eyes, one of the most important things is that the highest score which can bring him the scholarship and thus solve the financial problem especial for poor one. To these students ,the higher grades they have, the more scholarship they own. if you can see that, you can understand it more deeply.

Finally, score encourages the interesting of study. For a student who have high mark, he will have more interests to learn that subject, however, for those students who own a low mark, they also want to learn hard to gain a high score. When one put his heart in study, they will find the pleasure of learning.

To sum up, given the reasons discussed above, we can safely reach the conclusion that grades not only encourage students to learn, but also encourage them to learn better.

这观点有点问题。理由不充分。 如果连自己都没办法说服， 怎么争取其他人的认同呢？这个题目我建议写50％50％的。

xuli_123

想了半天，可能是我的表述有问题吧,因为我觉得理由还合理啊。

观点改成 the grades can encourage one’s learning .

To begin with, good students who want to study in a perfect school need a high mark.

Another reason is that the student who gain high score can get scholarship that  stimulates student to study hard.

Finally, score inspire the interests of study which encourage students to learn more things.

这样表述是不是好一点？

理由还是不充分吗？

分数不能促进学生学习的理由是什么呢？

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-1-13 18:31:48编辑过]

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1. 正面作用。

2。反面作用。 一心弄分数， 不管能力， 不培养爱好BLABLABLA

3。 适当条件适当的使用分数为激励， 会有好处。

xuli_123

会不会有点走题呢？

主题是：do you agree or disagree grades(marks) encourage students to learn.

虽然有反面作用，一心弄分数， 不管能力， 不培养爱好BLABLABLA，但仍旧起到了促进学习的作用啊，虽然没有Learn more things.

虽然我也不太赞同我文章的观点，可是觉得那样好写一些，只是为了紧扣题目而已。

你认为呢？