OG SC 104 , 求解 主语的修辞

zhouyangweiwei

104, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

   (A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
   
   (B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

  (C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

   (D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations

  (E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

这题看了ＯＧ的解释也还是想不太明白。Ｃ的选项，主语BP放在了两上修辞词之后。

那为什么Ｄ错了呢？ ＯＧ给到的解释是： Carefully coordinated ...absurdly modifies Beatrix Potter rather than her illustrations,

这个carefully coordinated 本来的动作执行者就是BP 这个人呀，像这种有两种修辞词的，不是通常都应该把主语放在中间吗？

看了很久，想了半天，还是不明白，求高人指点。。

zhouyangweiwei

因为在米国跟大家有时差的关系，自己顶一下吧，希望得到高手的解答，

谢谢

chongyini

我觉得吧，illustrations are coordinated with ...,而bp coordinate them with...

Ophena

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