不定式用法求大神指教啊OG13 Q128&Q133~~~~~~~~~

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bonbonjon 发表于 2016-10-12 18:40
我觉得是独立主格，但是主格词和分词并不是逻辑上的动宾关系，所以分词不能用ed形式，我觉得可能是错在这 ...

如果是独立主格应该用逗号隔开吧？

GMAT要上700

我想请问一下为什么这里的A选项错误了？不能the elephant is the descended from an aquatic animal     和its trunk originally evolving as a kind of snorkel平行？就是suggest that （the elephant is descended from an aquatic animal）and suggest that （its trunk originally evolving as a kind of snorkel）
而一定要是that the elephant is descended from an aquatic animal和 that its trunk originally evolving as a kind of snorkel平行？

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顶楼主！               

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bonbonjon 发表于 2016-10-12 18:40
我觉得是独立主格，但是主格词和分词并不是逻辑上的动宾关系，所以分词不能用ed形式，我觉得可能是错在这 ...

同意！with结构错在这个独立主格暗示evolve是被动的，是was evolved，并且with表伴随要和主句时态一致，其实应该是had been evolved，错上加错

willing_

GMAT要上700 发表于 2017-10-9 16:24
我想请问一下为什么这里的A选项错误了？不能the elephant is the descended from an aquatic animal     和 ...

如果省略that 就无法判断后面是与“the elephant had descended from an aquatic animal”平行，还是与“Australian embryologists have found evidence that……”平行了

LcR-

彼岸鸢尾yy 发表于 2013-10-6 19:59
这是一个外国instructor的解释，参考一下吧"evidence to suggest" and "evidence that suggests" are bot ...

“not because it's wrong -- just because it's ugly.”哈哈哈哈笑死

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Sonder

求问B选项中，除了descend没有用被动，还有哪里错了呢？
(B) Australian embryologists have found evidence that has suggested the elephant descended from an aquatic animal, its trunk originally evolving as a kind of snorkel.

Sonder

哈哈哈刚刚看到了Ron大神的解答.. 分享一下~
B选项中，-ING修饰语发生时间应该为过去时，和前句中现在时矛盾：
 -ING modifiers SHOULD adopt the timeframe of the clause to which they are attached. The problem here is that we need to change the timeframe: "the elephant is descended..." is stated in the present, because it's a timeless fact about evolution, but "its trunk originally evolved..." needs to be in the past because it's an isolated historical event. the -ING modifier mistakenly suggests that both of these belong to the same timeframe.

anmimiya

bonbonjon 发表于 2016-10-12 18:40
我觉得是独立主格，但是主格词和分词并不是逻辑上的动宾关系，所以分词不能用ed形式，我觉得可能是错在这 ...

独立主格需要有逗号隔开，独立主格是不影响主句的语法结构的，只不过在意思上和主句有联系，虽然里楼主发帖都过去这么久了。。。但是希望以后有同样问题的人可以看到～