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penguinvino

Monitoring heart patients’ exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(A) Monitoring heart patients’ exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(B) Monitoring the exercise of heart patients, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(C) Small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines are now used to monitor the exercise of both heart patients and athletes.

(D) Broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines, small transmitters are now used to monitor heart patients’ exercise, as well as athletes exercising.

(E) Both athletes exercising and heart patients’ exercise are now monitored by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.
这道题中，我选择了B。C选项虽然避免了exercise和exercising形式不对称的问题，但是是不是句子的重心也改变了呢？原句的结构是Monitoring the exercise 。。。is。。。但是C选项就变成measurements are used to。。。。   请大侠指教

vertex顶点

这道题太明显了，怎么能选B呢？  我们sentence correction不是找对的句子，而是相对好的句子。并列平行是一个结构中最重要的地方，如果并列平行错了，整个句子就会产生歧义。 首先一点，动名词不可以做名词，如果想做名词前面要加定冠词the，比如：the splitting apart of the continent、只有另一种特殊情况可以做名词，就是表示一种动作，比图：human being‘s buring，人类燃烧东西的这个动作   其他情况都不能用动名词做名词，另外，如果一个单词本身就有自己的名词，比如increase的名词也是increas，那么就更不能用increaing表示它的名词形式（除了上面说的表一个动作的情况），所以这里的exercising 和exercies是不能够并列平行的。 至于句意的问题不是你考虑的第一项，先比较语法错误，没有错误的选项再PK语义，两个结合起来，但是不能单独的偏向某一方面

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penguinvino

vertex顶点 发表于 2013-9-4 11:18
这道题太明显了，怎么能选B呢？  我们sentence correction不是找对的句子，而是相对好的句子。并列平行是一 ...

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